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ethiks has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-13-05 10:29 PM.

Da_Throwdest has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-14-05 08:44 AM.

[1] Pikachu is a Pokemon, that doesn't enjoy poke balls
[2] numbers--refers 2 guns...ex) .44, AK-47

:Kick Back & Listen:

..The teks in my hand like built up frustation AMH 'Hold In Violence'
& i'm 'Sniping Public Speakers' cuz i get the '[E]thikal 2 result 2 Tyrant
..U awoke a giant, A's knives 'Penetrate Ur Surface Like Cleats'
& have ya 'MIA' like 'Dwaine Wade' ur 'Chest Holdin The Heat'
i'm neva folding 2 the weak, i speak unique havin ya destiny fall
cuz even if 'I-Peek-At-Chu' i'd still b 'Kicking Poke Balls'!..
..dude will poke & crawl & try a 'Stall' like 'New York City Cabs'
cuz i'm put more 'Numbers 2 [E]thik' then he already has!!..
..that's 2 bad, like Allstar specials i'm the 'Sophmore Killin The Rookies'
cuz this 'Shaq-In-The-Wnba' cuz i'm constantly 'Postin-Up-On-Pussies'

Voted For: Da_Throwdest

this was a good battle yo heres how i saw it:

structure: imma give this to throw cause both of you had a good rhyme scheme and good flow, but throw was more consistent with his i thought and i was feelin it more

punches: damn that MIA line from throw was dope, i laughed at that... ethiks also had a couple good lines like the "all night to post" one, that was good... but i think throw gets this one despite the pikachu line which you could've done without

personals... i didnt really see any, to be honest

overall: i think throw gets this one with better wordplay and harder hitting punches, but this was a close battle so props to both of yall no hate

return the favor please links in sig

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Voted For: ethiks

LOL
Nice battle
Ethiks, ya came more witty an humouress

Da Throwdest, ya verse was aight, nothin special, few nice metas here n there, work on consistancy, an flow, ya verses didnt flow too well

Ethiks ya verse was nice, good conistancy, bars connected with each other, witty creative stuff, the picture of the ho is a classisc, an the closer is nice too, good shit

Ethiks gets my vote

Return the favor
Peeeeace

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Voted For: Da_Throwdest

Throwdest
..The teks in my hand like built up frustation AMH 'Hold In Violence'
& i'm 'Sniping Public Speakers' cuz i get the '[E]thikal 2 result 2 Tyrant
..U awoke a giant, A's knives 'Penetrate Ur Surface Like Cleats'
& have ya 'MIA' like 'Dwaine Wade' ur 'Chest Holdin The Heat'
i'm neva folding 2 the weak, i speak unique havin ya destiny fall
cuz even if 'I-Peek-At-Chu' i'd still b 'Kicking Poke Balls'!..
..dude will poke & crawl & try a 'Stall' like 'New York City Cabs'
cuz i'm put more 'Numbers 2 [E]thik' then he already has!!..
..that's 2 bad, like Allstar specials i'm the 'Sophmore Killin The Rookies'
cuz this 'Shaq-In-The-Wnba' cuz i'm constantly 'Postin-Up-On-Pussies' /LOL
Great Funny Ending
Nice hard punches
good structure
great elevation
8.5/10

Ethiks
dawg check ya verse, cuz im rippin ya facts.
even michael (jackson) is stoppin ya shit, with his dick in ya ass./ Al right
ya lines on hold, dont even fight for votes.
either ya shy or choked, cuz it took you all night to post.
wether you like this joke, take this advice i'd hope.
Da_Throwdest, i'll leavin you lookin just like this ho./ Pretty Good
dont be scared to get embarressed, ya disguise wont help.
though life itself is heaven, then ya lines is hell.
despite ya health, ya cant jock a kat like myself. /heh?
i'll put my bars in my pants, so you can ride my wealth./ IIGHT

Iight rhymes
not 2 many punches thrown, get mo punches in dere
iiight structure
average elevation work on elevatin mo n u b iight
7.5/10

my v/throwdest

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Voted For: Da_Throwdest

..The teks in my hand like built up frustation AMH 'Hold In Violence'
& i'm 'Sniping Public Speakers' cuz i get the '[E]thikal 2 result 2 Tyrant

Umm... Ok...

..U awoke a giant, A's knives 'Penetrate Ur Surface Like Cleats'
& have ya 'MIA' like 'Dwaine Wade' ur 'Chest Holdin The Heat'

LoL... Dope Wordplay... Punch = No Though...

i'm neva folding 2 the weak, i speak unique havin ya destiny fall
cuz even if 'I-Peek-At-Chu' i'd still b 'Kicking Poke Balls'!..

Eh... Sloppy...

..dude will poke & crawl & try a 'Stall' like 'New York City Cabs'
cuz i'm put more 'Numbers 2 [E]thik' then he already has!!..

Umm... Ok...

..that's 2 bad, like Allstar specials i'm the 'Sophmore Killin The Rookies'
cuz this 'Shaq-In-The-Wnba' cuz i'm constantly 'Postin-Up-On-Pussies'

Eh... Self Hype...

Overall - You Had Some Nice Wordplay... But Ya Punches Was Lackin'... Structure Was Good Though... I'd Say About A 4.5/10...

dawg check ya verse, cuz im rippin ya facts.
even michael (jackson) is stoppin ya shit, with his dick in ya ass.

Naw... Mj Shyt Iz Played Nigga...

ya lines on hold, dont even fight for votes.
either ya shy or choked, cuz it took you all night to post.

Multies, But No Punch...

wether you like this joke, take this advice i'd hope.
Da_Throwdest, i'll leavin you lookin just like this ho.

Naw... That Shyt Went Out In The 90's...

dont be scared to get embarressed, ya disguise wont help.
though life itself is heaven, then ya lines is hell.

Naw Duke... Shyt Don't Make Sense... Hell On Earth...

despite ya health, ya cant jock a kat like myself.
i'll put my bars in my pants, so you can ride my wealth.

Wdf... Ride Your Bars..? That's Stupid...

Overall - You Had Some Played Concepts... Some Shyt Didn't Make Sense... Structure Was Cool And You Had Multies, But That's About It... I'd Say A 3.5...

Vote - Da_Throwdest... He Superior Wordplay And Structure... Although ethiks Had Superior Multies... Throwdest Was Able To Edge It Out On Punches... And He At Least Attempted Nameplay Which Made His Verse More Personal...

I am just checking the stats 2 see who is winning so far.

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