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Old 09-04-06, 07:49 AM   #1
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Old 09-10-06, 08:48 PM   #2
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Bein A Distraught Teenager, I Been There, My Computer Took The Place Of Love,
Til I Found Out How Much It Killed My Brain Literally Came Face 2 Face Wit A Slug//
The Internet's Graced A Bug, The Killer Virus Itself That Erased My Memory,
Destroyed Having 2 See My Life Bein Sucked In The Net; A New Pace Of Sensory//
Accessin The World Wide Web - A Dot Com Followed By Typin Nouns,
Thought If I'd Turn The Monitor The Other Way I'd B Turnin My Life Around//
Fingers Was Glued 2 The Keyboard, Mind Warped In2 Addictin Websites,
2 Many Megabytez Installed, "Computers R New Age Toys 4 Conflictin Head Lice"//
"They Put Astonishin Pressure 2 A Teens Mind, And Eat Away His Brains,
So U Must Try 2 Break This Habit And Seek A Way Of Change"//
B4 It Gets U Kid, Then U Stuck In 4ever, Find Ya Self A Plan Okay,"
I Couldn't Break The Habit, But At Least I Got A Can Of Spray//
So I'll B Damned 2day If I Become Worse, I'll Overcome This Dead System,
Virus Scans Couldn't Kill The Bug, I Just Didn't Let It Make Me A Web Victim//
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Old 09-10-06, 11:49 PM   #3
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why so serious!!??
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no contact wit the outside life left himself completely distinguished
through the arguing and fights his once sane mind is now deminished
seeing weird illusions that bites attempting to leave them extinguished
he tried his best ta handle life he's ready ta just say he's finished

ehh i dont feel like finishing it
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