http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=4857840

word up
lets get some decent feedback here

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feelin this beat..your vocals sound a lot more clear

lyrically this is comin off real nice..better than the last time i heard..a big difference from your other tracks about gangster gangster stuff. i like this side better for you.

your emotion matches this beat nicely. just certain words sound weird when u say like "ear"..i think you pronounce it too well. yeah its weird but maybe lay off the end of the word to give it a better sound..

hook is real empty..gets boring and its hard to hear what dudes sayin..fill in that space at the end of the hook...end of the song is wacky..kinda fell off a lot.



beginning of the song is real nice..just the end is so plain and boring

thanks for the feedback, Implicit
lol @ wacky.

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for some reason this is the 3rd track that I couldnt play so i'mma restart my comp n see if it works...dont worry homie I be back to rate this shit...


PEACE

^thanks in advance

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I like this joint...U got a nice flow but some times u try n fit too many words n it gets jumbled n shit. Do u one take a lot of ur shit? Cuz it sounds like u doin a rushed kinda job. U'd be really really good if u got a better set up n spent more time on ur takes. Besides that, u good.

aiight umm

this tracc is aiight. ur pronounciation is aiight. good for this kinda tracc i guesss. im feeling the beat. the pianos are sicc. good topic. some real lyrical shit. Your flow is on. right choice for this beat aswell. adlibs are good. your quality is aiight. again. not studio professional but its listenable. the lyrics are good. you didnt fall off beat so that was good. so straight shit.

overall 6.9/10

rtf

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Kontroverzy's Myspace

This an alright track...the vocals are cool, i'm not much for this type of feel to a track but it's a deep enough track. Came in strong good emotion and some cool stuff like
"they think the shits normal so they take a hit". Serious track.

7.5/10

ummm yea....Do Ray Mi Fa So me ft. tha q peace

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My SpellBook

GET DOPER

Knowledge is Power, Stop being Weak

Featuring such heads as...Tha Q, 9th degree, Enygma,The green team, Big J and probably you! SO DON'T SLEEP!

I haven't been able to stop listening to this shit for the past 2 days, man.

Emotion is dope, beat is dope, lyrics are dope..Everything is how it should be. I'm really feeling the message youre giving, and you do a real nice job with it. Nothin' else really to say. Good shit.

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man whatever critique has already been said..........all imma say shit is dope and i'm feelin it fam.....keep droppen fam track wuz nice.......

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voks real clean....libs r off once in a while...lyrics is nice , on the deep realness tip..good shit man....i like the beat to...so much i used it a month b4 you ! lol

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=4771680

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HELLLZ YEEAHH !!!!

I like this track. Your lyrics is pure man I love your story behind the lyrics. The beat is fuckin ill yup of course. Your flow and delivery is hot. I love your style/swagger, it's kinda coo how you say ya words. Your voice or your accent w/e it is but I like it though sometimes its hard to understand for most people I understand it pretty good. overall this track is pretty tine zone.

rtf here: http://community.rapverse.com/showt...650#post3150650

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thanks for all the positive feedback
hmm
i think imma fall back from the guns and fuck with shit like this for a while
imma return all the favors too
gimme some time

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We should do a remix.

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