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Old 10-16-06, 08:27 PM   #1
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I lead a life filled with crime
yeah, im stuck in the streets
Im steady losing peace of mind
Cause of cops on the beat
So where do I go to whom do I turn?
Im headed to eternal damnation, forever I'll burn
and never I'll learn.., Cause im still stuck in my ways
Im stuck in a daze
like a bat ive lost sight, yea im stuck in a cave
Im stuck in a maze
Im trapped and my mind is a haze
Things no longer makes since ive lost track of my days
So now i will blaze
Just to feel oh so glorious
Im ready to die, so now i feel oh so notorious
But still im on a quest and ive veered from my path
and knowledge is the water that i use for my bath



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Old 10-17-06, 04:16 AM   #2
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Old 10-17-06, 04:30 AM   #3
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well this should have been posted in OPEN MIC sone real...if you gangsta flowing it dont belong here first off man....nice shit nice multies and metaphors and detail feelings but take this to OM.......i feel you should take it there and not here poetry is a more deep connection with your inner feel and emotion and poems speak through how they feel and shit son so yea......
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