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Old 03-06-09, 04:51 AM   #1
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the kid n8 vs Brydon

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Check in by: 03-09-09 at 05:51 AM

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Old 03-06-09, 01:43 PM   #2
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Old 03-06-09, 02:34 PM   #3
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Old 03-06-09, 02:50 PM   #4
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Whats up lad im from england, ima drop you from a height..
i excite lines for you to be asking for a rest-bite.
You proved nothing in ya last battle against murdah...
u bit so much wackness, had people thinking they already b4 heard ya.
I hate snakes like you, watch,read then follow,
i put the brakes on you by announcing, u dont scream jus swollow.
Bitch that you are you need to check ya self punk,
coz when u get caught for biting you need to change ya whole name u left a cent skunk.
i freestyle your ass no need to do a check on this clown,
coz no-one likes a cheater, so his not liked in this town.
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Old 03-08-09, 10:33 PM   #5
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I'm ill dense your nuthin to get over like a fake fence
and if you broke a dollar bill, you still couldnt make cents

You can't even spit a hot line? Please tell me your shitting.
You need talk to UPS son, your delivery's missing

and I know you hate these flows so much it makes you wanna hate me
you may be ill but even if I was a pill you still couldnt take me

don't you see my words are like weights, Brydon gonna lose his neck
end up sitting around his house, collecting a disability check

He says I suck ya know but check his last vote? man I love hypocrite people
this battle like Domino vs. Sweet n Low nigga were not Equal
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Old 03-08-09, 10:49 PM   #6
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Voted For: the kid n8

I'm ill dense your nuthin to get over like a fake fence
and if you broke a dollar bill, you still couldnt make cents

You can't even spit a hot line? Please tell me your shitting.
You need talk to UPS son, your delivery's missing

and I know you hate these flows so much it makes you wanna hate me
you may be ill but even if I was a pill you still couldnt take me

don't you see my words are like weights, Brydon gonna lose his neck
end up sitting around his house, collecting a disability check

He says I suck ya know but check his last vote? man I love hypocrite people
this battle like Domino vs. Sweet n Low nigga were not Equal

7/10

Whats up lad im from england, ima drop you from a height..
i excite lines for you to be asking for a rest-bite.
You proved nothing in ya last battle against murdah...
u bit so much wackness, had people thinking they already b4 heard ya.
I hate snakes like you, watch,read then follow,
i put the brakes on you by announcing, u dont scream jus swollow.
Bitch that you are you need to check ya self punk,
coz when u get caught for biting you need to change ya whole name u left a cent skunk.
i freestyle your ass no need to do a check on this clown,
coz no-one likes a cheater, so his not liked in this town.
6/10

nate had the overal better verse and had decent punches

brydon's verse was hot too but was not a good as nate's
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Old 03-09-09, 07:19 AM   #7
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No hate but each and every bar has been written before somewhere, so you have either bitten or recycled the whole lot.
The only line that didnt flow well for you was the one with brydon init so it showed you had to ulter the line.
For real kid are you seriously writing these or are you just cheating?
Coz im seriously starting to wonder now.
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Old 03-09-09, 10:25 AM   #8
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Voted For: Brydon

vote: brydon for better flow and better originality....
the kid had mad OLD PLAYED PUNCHES yo ur first bar was the oldest punch i ever seen and seen that punch so many times its not even funny....

vote: brydon

P.S advice for brydon
try to focus more and elevate on ur punches and try to get a bit more complex a bit and use multis to help ya flow you def got potential just keep working on those things and u'll be aight..
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Old 03-09-09, 10:30 AM   #9
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Nice one murdah much appreciated!!!!!
Yeah im gonna try sort the multi's out in my nxt battle, jus trying to get back into the swing of things dude.Thanks for the advice.
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Old 03-09-09, 10:36 AM   #10
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Brydon if you have any suspisions of him biting google his lines and trace the links to where they came from... if nothing comes up then its not bitten... if you find something PM it to me with the link and the battle link where it came from and i will give you the win him the loss and THE BAN
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Old 03-09-09, 10:59 AM   #11
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every one is hating on me i love it !! google.com please =] no biting here
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Old 03-09-09, 11:24 AM   #12
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im not googleing shit but everyone knows those are old played punches and everyone know they've been said before so even if u didnt bite or recycle word for word at the end its the same old punch at the end.....
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Old 03-09-09, 12:08 PM   #13
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im pretty sure i beat you freestyling so suck my dick u suck
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Old 03-09-09, 12:11 PM   #14
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i don't understand why everyone thinks im cheating how about u check my ip adress they dont match with whoever your comparing me brydon u just suck your almost as bad as murdah if you think im cheatin just google my lines bitch made nigga
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Old 03-09-09, 04:10 PM   #15
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Shut the fuck up you faggot, as if you talking shit..... Each punch u had is older then the myth of santa ya prick.......
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