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03-30-07, 05:42 PM
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BOSS UP, Shear Keezy, J.Summz
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03-30-07, 07:32 PM
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hmmm needs some kinda intro or somethin
quality's good but accapella needed some layers, maybe doubles or somethin flow's on point, dunno who this is on the hook but he got a catchy delivery. lyrics on both parts is sorta simple but like summers rhyme scheme, got a lil more complex than shear. not feelin the beat, shear got a lil off wit the flow like twice that i noticed but besides that it was on point. good shit rtf please, i'd appreciate it http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=240957
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03-31-07, 12:09 AM
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where is jeff at in the beg...sayin how ill he is....this track needs it....your gettin better at delivery...did jail do that for you haha....nah playin but word kaughn has that voice that works for hooks.....the bitchy line was rough :/ oh well.....word up, the beat kinda gets repetative near the end....i like the adlibs from j's verse....good shit seein you two back together....peace up a town down....<-yea im bringin it back
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03-31-07, 01:20 PM
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i was thinken in needed a lil shit talkin in the beginin but i wanted to get big dick to say some shit to
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04-02-07, 01:05 PM
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boss UP............................................
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04-02-07, 03:38 PM
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ThE UlTimAtE GhOSt WrITeR
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yea this joint was nice brah...it would've stood out with a hype, shit talkin intro on it...but you gon save that for the next track...return the love and get at me brova...todays the only time i'll be on here...
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04-02-07, 03:52 PM
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beat is nice.. KA got some nice shit..
verse 1 nice feelin the flow lyrics pretty nice Hook is good real catchy verse 2 is nice liken this flow better lyrics is also nice nice track i would let it play in the ride tight work 7.5/10
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04-02-07, 09:35 PM
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ight yea beggining seems a lil plain beat is ight .....summers flow is coo lyrics is aight delivery is on point...hook is ight culda been mixed better fa sho....shere ur flow is coo u needa turn ur adlibs like a db in a half.....overall this was coo....hook is ight i think it needs another set of dubs.....overall this was coo gud shit stay up pz
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