this is some fire right here a freestyle finisher for the mixtape i aint done my manz gots to drop some heat on it as well and it'll be a wrap but i felt it was needed for me to drop this on yall peep it...1ne..

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=301499

My 2 Linkz

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2439247
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=208676

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listening.....


holy shit...this is a freestyle? lmao.....*thinks that its better than most peoples writtens on this site*.....flow is good...delivery is killer...man ill be honest...you pin pointed this....and u say its for the end of a mixtape...this'll mos def put a good finishing touch on it....i dont even know how to give contructive crit on this to be honest....

please return the favor..... http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=208403

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damn i love this beat, has a nice lil sound to it, good flow and for the choice of words and conisistanty you did very. a way better freestyler then me hahha. but you really get ya word out when you record man, good job wit ya shit.

could ya rtf on my Quiet Storm freestyle its somewhere in the song forum.

thanks 1

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good looks homie im uppin this holla 1ne...

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Audio Head of The Month "JUNE"

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dont like the beat, heard this sound too many times... flow is nice, yea this is nice for a freestyle.. if its actually a freestyle, cant be proven it is n cant be proven that its not, so cant say alot really, but yeah ive heard it all before as far as lyrics go, and the beats nuttin new but ye keep it up.. safe

j'yea!!... this is niiice... freestyle some shit here still... beat is nice to, like laid back an' bumpin same time.. comin wit some mad nice lycx on this still, specially for a freeze.. i'ight...

hit up my track "Killin It In T-O"...

here the link
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=208734

peace

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leady must you always have somethin smart to say?...if you dont think i free get at me on yahoo messenger and i'll embarrass you for some fun iight homie enough talkin i dont chit chat wit obnoxious gits homie Ez 1ne..

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dope, like the beat....dayummm this is hot for a freestyle, even for a written this is dope, lyrics are gud but the delivery is killer man, top track right here the flow is real nice, nice finish to wot shud be a dope mixtape sens

stay up

pz

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LMAO @ you net thuggery... all i said was, i cant say if its a freestyle or not cos its the internet, you cant prove.. wow @ you yahoo, still doesnt mean u cant spit pre-writtens.... and i do that yahoo bull shit, i do that live on stage shit where its obvious if its pre-written or not.

i gave u props, so stfu and most importantly GROW THE FUCK UP

^ look at this prick....i do it live on stage ooooohhh big fuckin deal you aint gon go no where in yo career if thats what chu call it..and aint no body doin no net thuggery im just puttin you str8 young'n...now if you wanna see some thug shit get cho ass in the united states and we'll see wassup i dont talk much i just act out on fake niggas like you...just cuz you rap dont mean you any good or none the less hard homie get cho shit str8 and shows?...nigga i've done wayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy more shows then you and imma be wayyyyyyyyy bigger then you so that shit about spittin prewrittens never that nigga you got me fucked up white boy iight so Ease up you lil homo thug 1ne...

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lmfao, do u know how many shows ive done?? no i didnt think so, so nice1 on the assumptions... and you gettin mad cos i dont hop on your dick like every1 else.. u pathetic.

give me the money for my plain ticket and ill travel to NY n chill at my boys house down in queens, im not bout to get in some net beef with u, i gave u props for your work here, but just saud i cant comment if its freestyled or not cos its the internet and you got mad, proving that somebody known as senser is abit sensitive(kinda ironic huh?)

u the wackest and softest bitch i've seen on this site..all you do in flood nigga threads wit bullshit ass feedback as if you any good...and i can care less the amount of shows you've done all im sayin is that i've done more and if you want a numba here it goes 58 shows and 32 solo gigs and when i mean gigs i mean people askin for me to go to the club...yo wack ass wont get no shows in the us sounds like craig david homie dont even try actin like you some hot shit cuz you aint..and aint no one sensitive pussy...and as for your plane ticket?...if you've done any shows yo broke ass should be able to afford you let me know when you in Ny and watch how this is delt wit ENOUGH SAID!! dont flood my thread you gonna respond to this pm faggot 1ne..

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ROFLMFAO @ you... oh wow your so funny... and lmfao @ soft, especially when u dont know me what so ever.

proves this net shit means more to you than you let on.. but nevermind, u keep attempting to look cool home fry..... the little gay act suits your homosexuality very well.

im done.. peace

^lmao @ u going when man dropped his show numbers on you...

*exits thread before getting involved*

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