im good for 2 links, its just reaaal early in tha morning so im a lil tired to find them now.. but i'll edit w/ them soon...

yo i had alot of fun on this track ferreal, it just started out messin around and i wasnt really feelin it. but then after tha first verse i wrote sum quick shit to tha third , spit it in one take (which is rare for me) and threw it all together, i fucked w/ sum new effects, tell me if u can notice anything different. then lephT jumped on this shyt n just left it murdered.. so yea its a mixtape cut fersure... peep it up!!!

http://www.soundclick.com/pro/defau...66&content=song

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i told you what i thought about this already but let me leave some shit again..this was alil step up from your usual drops i see you started takin some of my tips into consideration thats good sooner or later your gonna see a even bigger improvement just keep toyin around wit cha flow try makin it sound more fluid and your tracks should sound alottt better then most cats here....imagine it already does and you still got lil flaws to work on..na'mean just keep strivin na'mean try freestylin on the beat before you start writin to it and choose a flow you wanna go wit first and from there start writin feel me well im out kid Ez 1ne...`

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Mmm its alright, i wouldn't dig it but its aight.

your flows too slow for the beat it sounds... rhyme scheme is best ive heard from you.. you still need to learn editing... WOAH theres a section that actually had a dope flow... the hook sucks, it doesnt flow properly.... but this is the best ive heard from u... whos dropping 2nd verse??? he outshined what u did to be honest... seriously u NEED to learn how to edit and mix, because when sum1 with good quality(like second verse on this) and u drop with that heavy as fuck echo or reverb w/e you use, it makes your shit sound extremely fucked up.

delivery is cool, could be better, could be worse.... yea, in all honesty this is the best ive heard from you, but i wouldnt listen to again, too many issues need fixing up on it.... keep at it though

it's the omen... this beat is fuckin siiiick.. this is by fAr the best shit i hear from you, you on beat alot better then last time i peepd ur shit still yo.. hook is catchy too still...

2nd man... this is some nice shit still, flow is nice, lyrics is on more a hip-hop tip then omen.. like omen had the circus steez, this some rap shit... feelin it tho for real... y'all toin this beat justice...

omen again... you goin more hip-hop on this, u brought ur shit to the same level of the last guy... but still kept ur grime style, am feelin this track yo, how u end this verse is dope too... rewind it back... lol...

ne-way peep my track "Killin' it in T-O" peace dun

yo, peep this 4 me bro..

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=208734

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no doubt sense, i def been takin ur tips to heart n workin on these issues, just wait till mah next drop, ima kill it, as long as i work on improvin sumn diff on everytrack ur gonna see improvement f'sho.... leady... i hope u didnt think that i actually read whatever hate u've clogged my thread w/.... cuz i didnt.... lol... o n blunt maaan where u been at? i needa holler atchu, good looks man ferreal ima get at ur track rite now playa. thanks for all tha veiws!

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omen stop being gay.. i actually gave u good advice and gave u good props for a part of your track aswell... i dont let my opinions on somebody decide my views on a track, just grow up seriously dude

omen= duz not care what leadys oppinion is whether it b good OR bad...

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then that just proves exactly how immature you are

upppidddy doooo

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yea i said uppidy dooo didnt i?

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