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Lightnin' 0 0%
the gifted one 2 100.00%
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Old 09-12-04, 07:16 PM   #1
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Lightnin' vs the gifted one

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Old 09-12-04, 07:17 PM   #2
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the gifted one has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-12-04 07:17 PM.
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Old 09-12-04, 07:19 PM   #3
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Lightnin' has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-12-04 07:19 PM.
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Old 09-12-04, 07:24 PM   #4
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The gifted ones back again.
Ready to fry you infront of all your friends.
Its best you stop hiding in the grass.
Soon or later I will cut it and leave the blades in your ass.
I go hard to the fullest.
If i stay involved I can have you playing dodgeball with bullets.
I will cook you leave your ashes in the past.
Shoot off your leg and then kick you in the ass.
I got the hottest flow in the sea but im not fishing.
Boy you wish you could be me so keep on wishing.
Maybe next time son and you can stop crying.
This battle been over and I wasnt even trying.
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Old 09-12-04, 07:35 PM   #5
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I'm the don dada always lacin prada/
Yousa buster, all you got is nada/
Thats right nothin, I'm touchin you wid hollow tips/
My crips and slugs rips through ya skin where you been/
I woulda killed you sooner but I tryna sin/
I only fear one man, dats one God, and one son/
Matched up wid me holdin twin guns, now thats fun/
How you gon trip like you wanna battle me/
You need to work on vocab, pick up a Scrabble, B/
I rattle G's like cattle see, ya momma proud of me/
I spit that hot shit the split pussy lips, and wet clits/
Sparkin techs wid bananna clips, makin ya'll do back flips/
Fuckin wid me is like fuckin a whore/
Cause you catchin AIDS while you think you bout to score/
Bitches like you get standin applause/
And I ain't talkin bout applause that abides by the laws/
Clappin wid pistols or 12 guage shotties/
Tell ya sister hi, I think she is a hottie/
bonned her through and through, skeeted in the jeep/
Then I left condoms on ya passenger seat/
Ya rhymes is wreckless come on homie check this/
Better call Sherlock, he'll wanna inspect this/
You can kiss my dick from the tip to the shaft/
Cause you stranded on an island, wid out a fuckin raft/
So as I lay the ending, and it you find trending/
Re-read this shit, cause my rhymes is mind bending/
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Old 09-13-04, 02:40 PM   #6
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uppin
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Old 09-13-04, 10:26 PM   #7
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uppin fo votes
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Old 09-14-04, 07:05 AM   #8
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uppin
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Old 09-14-04, 02:46 PM   #9
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uppin fo votes
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Old 09-14-04, 02:57 PM   #10
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Voted For: the gifted one

first dude won because he had more punches...simple as that.

second dude...man your shit was a tad better, but still on that dumb gansta i shot you with my 4 4 shit. both of u suck, but first guy just had more punches. simple, he wins.

vote: lightnin
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Old 09-14-04, 06:11 PM   #11
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fuck you uppin for votes
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Old 09-14-04, 06:18 PM   #12
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Voted For: the gifted one

aiiiight...

gifted got this, better structured an better vocabulary in the verse....

punches were off from both mcs, not really any decent metas, multiness (not a bad thing just pointin out theres no multies) ...an ya both couldda used better personals (no hate)

gifted got this cause of better structure n wordplay

return the favor

p e a c e
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Old 09-14-04, 06:19 PM   #13
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MultiLESS i meant**

but yea, return the favor!
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Old 09-14-04, 06:31 PM   #14
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you both suck im not even gonna vote haha but the one who sucks more both
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Old 09-14-04, 09:34 PM   #15
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fuck u bitch im new uppin(fuckin loser)
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