Aight Check It...

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~R~

NeTime You Wanna Check In...

LoL..Tonight Would Be Nice..

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I'm Ready TO Drop...

You?

R-Rated still sucks, kid's never had much talent
Bout to wrap a level around ya neck...
...letting ya body hang in the balance
Fuck Restricted, you cant win, regardless of what you brought
Quick to slam ya head through the TV, just to channel ya thoughts
We aint friends, but believe, we pushin envelopes dude
I mean I'm settin trends... you work in the mailroom
And its true, you own relaunched.... best believe...
...it means you still suck, shit... DirtBoy runs the text league!
Who you impressin? No one, cause honestly, cuz, you suck
Adebisi's the pick of the litter, you just spent time picking it up
Fuck, on the real site, you know you'd be constantly losing
Only time that R's the best is in a midst of confusion
So peep what I"m doin... watch, as I sever this cock
And cut him a break, to see him speed right into writers block
No rock, no gold, no talent, all I hear kid do is yellin
Nah wait, you'll rock ice.... tryin to reduce the swellin
Kid'll get a d/r win... but really ya text is worthless
And if my fate is whoring you... then I just served my purpose
Ya burnt bitch... so grasp nine's... just like ya do the boys
Too bad when opportunity knocked...
...you complained bout the noise
Keep ya poise, you'll need it, as you know I whore kids
While you'll stay like ya avy.... never able to get tricks

Aight...Check It....

Yo....Peep Dis...

Check It....3....2....1.....

I'm Leaving You Confinded, Trapt Wit'N, Check Ya Skin,
White-Honkey, Your Lyrics Are Wack, Why You Trying Text Again?/
Check Ya Status On Your Alias Adebisi, Bitch Your 0-3,
How The Fuck You Gone Represent Rb When You Rap Half-Heartedly?/
Pardon Me, But Why You Spitting Hardcore When You Really R&B? This Guy Checkin Males, Maybe Thats Why Your Always Hard-On-Me/
Listen Fag, I Don't Wanna Sex You, I Was Never Into That,
This Fag, Asked Me To Give Him Brains Hoping For A Betta Intellect/
Ya Words Getting Concerned Now, Ya Square But You Barely Box, I'll Give You A Chance To Run, But You'll Die Trying Like Terry Fox/
I'm Making Cats Laugh Like Rodney Carington, With The Jokes I Sling, In Critical Condition, Verbally Beating You Worse Than Rodney King/
Thought You Retired, Original Rb Must Need Sum Reinforcements, Merked Dis Fag, The Crowd Not Pleased, Wanting Reindorcements/
Yo Kid, This Ain't Burger King, You Can't Have It Your Way,
Shoulda Forfitted, Cause Man I Can Tell, It Just Ain't Your Day/
Better Be Counting Ya Lucky Stars, and Rubbing Ya Rabbits-Feet, All The Luck In The World Couldn't Help, Your Labeled With Defeat/
As Soon As You Replied To Dis Thread, Ya Record Was Diminished, Your OG R&B Friends? Won't Respect You When Dis Is Finished/

Yo...Its An Honor To Battle The Great Chrit....Respect Man

~R~

Nice Drop Man...

Props To You...

Uppin For Votes..

~R~

lol this battle was one sided, adebisi
merked Restricted. R punches was weak
and landed no affect. while A came decent
with a few ok punches here and there. R
you really need to elevate homie get some
bettter punchlines.

V/Adebisi


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damn yo this was a nice battle good shit for,m both. restricted u had a lot of basic shit nah mean and sum of the shit was played. a lot of weak punches 2 and like i said it was played. u wasnt really usin anything new, the flow waS hot tho man props on that shit.

damn ademsi dat shti was crazy man.. sik punches and flow and everything was dope in there . like restricted said props on dat verse.. yo do u wanna join my crew? its called ill disease but were still waiting on a name and we need a dope batller lyke u. anyways ur shit was hot and original, dese were my favorite lines:

So peep what I"m doin... watch, as I sever this cock
And cut him a break, to see him speed right into writers block
And its true, you own relaunched.... best believe...
...it means you still suck, shit... DirtBoy runs the text league!

restrictes bess puncheaz

Pardon Me, But Why You Spitting Hardcore When You Really R&B? This Guy Checkin Males, Maybe Thats Why Your Always Hard-On-Me
I'm Leaving You Confinded, Trapt Wit'N, Check Ya Skin,
White-Honkey, Your Lyrics Are Wack, Why You Trying Text Again?/

nyce shit props yall but abesise gets muh vote.

both of u join my crew!

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Personally, I didn't think this battle was that close.
Though restricted came with some ight punches
and a few personals he just wasn't quite up to par.
Ade came with just more witty concepts. Thus his
stuff was hitting harder.
Ex:



Always Beats


that stretched, stretched, stretched, stretched, stretched, stretched line and

forced wordplay was terrible. Lines like that cost Restricted this
battle.

Now dont bitch. Probably the best breakdown you're getting.

vote - Ade

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Adebisi just completely rammed his fist thru ur anal cavity and unplugged
ur rectum from ur intestinal tracts...damn...not even a challenge...dude
had better everything...and plus...Restricted said white-honkey..and thats
not even considered a punch..i mean seriously...white honkey?..what is
this..the Jeffersons?...anywho..my vote goes to adebisi


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Adebisi - Punches were witty and hard hitting, creativity was funny. Everything was where it needed to be, style was veteran like. Personals were also here and there, which was also a big part of the verse. Overall.. Adebisi came hard, nice punches, good personals, wittyness... and creativity.


^One of the several funniest parts of the verse.

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Re$ticted - Style was veteran like.. about a year and a half ago, style went out way back. Which shows a bit of herbishness. Punches were weak, but strong at some points, they could really use work. No wittyness what so ever. Personals were there, but not hard hitting as well, they were played... Things the whole RB knows. Nothing was really interesting in your verse, alot of your concepts were played.


^one of the many played lines
Honestly.. i didn't see any bars worth quoteing.
And your lines were also very stretched

V/Adebisi

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Ade - shit was cool, had mad quotables, i was feelin
the channel your thoughts line. you was spittin fire
some of the best shit i`ve seen on this site. the
hangin your balance line was cool, i think almost every
line you posted was pretty good it was almost legendary.

Restricted - you was nice to dawg but some of your
shit was elementary. at some times i was like daaaamn
this dude is nice then at other times i was like what
the fuck? you ain`t got not type of consistency if you
improve on that you`ll b one of the dopest textcees
on the net.

but all in i think Ade took this one he came more consistent
with his and his punches hit harder, his flow was a little better
too. i think he had the overall better drop

Vote - Ade.


Oxygen = Koncept. You were also banned under Log!c or something like that. You already voted. Banned for double voting /cheating and votes invalidated.
-strobe

restricted took this i felt his strucyure and flow was alot better...
The better intellect was a dope line but tha channel one was also dope...
i gotta go with restricted though his personals hit alot harder and some of his lines where hot.....aiiight...

Vote:restricted..

return the favour on rollin deep Vs atticus

Need a better explanation
-strobe

breakdown for adebisi:

flow:i don't know pretty basic nothing that stood out wasn't bad though 6/10

volcab:good job better then average 7/10

punches:you threw a good amount of them really attacking him almost everyline my fav line,"Quick to slam ya head through the TV, just to channel ya thoughts" didn't really care for that line against me but good job here 7/10

overall:20/30 you should post verses like this in the battle league this was good a whole level better then what you do there

breakdown for restricted:

flowretty average even off in spots not the best i've seen from you 5/10

volcab:good use i guess kinda pointless though when you didnt really flow too great 6/10

punches:some real good lines here seemed like they really hurt my fav,"A Chance To Run, But You'll Die Trying Like Terry Fox/" i'd give you 7/10


overall:18/30 good verse but the flow just seemed off on this one

vote--adebisi even though he's trying to throw lines at me he did take this one here

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and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league

Snatch ya sole, leave kid empty and yellin
And rockin ice
....to simply reduce the swellin

^^^ This is the same punch that he used in the punchline battle. I liked the rest of his shit though. My Fav was:

Who you impressin? No one, cause honestly, cuz, you suck
Adebisi's the pick of the litter, you just spent time picking it up

Restricted came wit some pretty tight shit too...... He had some decent wordplay and personals. My Fav was:

I'm Leaving You Confinded, Trapt Wit'N, Check Ya Skin,
White-Honkey, Your Lyrics Are Wack, Why You Trying Text Again?/

^^^ could have left the white honkey part out, but that was a good punch!

I thought these verses were evenly matched but the truth of the matter is, Adebisi was recycling lines. I don't know how many more of them were recycled but I know that if you do it once, you are bound to do it again.

Vote: Restricted

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