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05-04-05, 06:38 PM
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cant mess wit Succes one of the best in the midwest
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club banger(short)
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Ima soldier ima thug I'm so much more//
rappin white hold da floor it aint a game no more// And Ima fightin dogg homie, I don't really give a fuck// I'll have you in a head lock while getting krunk in the club// I got cash to spare, but aint sparin no crap // if you know me you know I carry heat on my back// And by "heat" I dont mean guns I'm just soo hot// Started flowin at the age of 9 dat oughta putcha in shock// Im not gonna stop rappin till I fill every gap dat that I'm lackin// get piad for all the hundreds of the smack that I'n stackin// yet my skin is almost, as white as crack is// fact is, I'm black never fucked a white chick (as if)// Its been known I have more power than god on steriods// you can say all you want about me you know I'm peranoid//   $ucce$$ leave me some good feed |
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05-04-05, 06:39 PM
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cant mess wit Succes one of the best in the midwest
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leave some honest feed
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05-04-05, 06:41 PM
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............................uppin for feedback..........................
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05-04-05, 06:42 PM
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...............................quit sleepin mutha fuckaaaaaaaaaaaaas....................
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05-04-05, 07:00 PM
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were da feed????????
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05-04-05, 07:03 PM
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cant mess wit Succes one of the best in the midwest
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uppin......................
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05-04-05, 07:03 PM
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^^ What?? I dont get that line...This was iight, but too mainstream type shit...Throw in some more punches and multies...And GET ON AIM!!!!!!!!!! pz |
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05-04-05, 07:05 PM
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cant mess wit Succes one of the best in the midwest
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aight whatever i need more feed
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05-04-05, 07:45 PM
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cant mess wit Succes one of the best in the midwest
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come on quit sleepin
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05-04-05, 08:31 PM
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...................uppin..........................
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05-04-05, 08:32 PM
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cant mess wit Succes one of the best in the midwest
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not enough feed..........quit sleepin
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05-05-05, 05:00 PM
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cant mess wit Succes one of the best in the midwest
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1 person feed wtf????????????
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05-05-05, 05:19 PM
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cant mess wit Succes one of the best in the midwest
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sleepin mutha fuckers
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05-05-05, 05:22 PM
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I'm going to give feed quality you gave me.
9/10 good shit nice punches LMMFAO dude dont go giving stupid feed without even reading the piece. Now I'm going to rate yours: Pretty wack to me, its basic stuff, and its too much like mainstream crap like magik said.
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05-05-05, 05:34 PM
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this would be aiight to some kids who dont understand the dynamics of rap with a dope ass track to add substance. but its mediocre at best. i mean up your vocab be more creative use a more complex rhyme scheme. dont just type shit up just cuz. write sumthing that has meaning. not the garbage u see most artist to day spit about. be different
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