Eyo dis sum shit i came up wit wen i was thinkin sum heavy shit....but notice how flick multies..i think its aight let me know what ya'll think

Eyo, as i analyze this pad i know my self as king
This life that we lead got our brains all insane
but i hold my head up, while starin at tha rain
got me thinkin life and death game is all tha same
while u on earth ur birth is determined by pain
black on black crime continues shit aint never gon change
instead ur influenced ur success depends on bling
how well ur mind set it dont matter to them
the only options left kill ni99as or sling
but im a smart boy in my heart immo win
ready to sin
waitin 4 da thing immo bring
gotta distort my mind so the answer is gin
tha pain within
strikes like a bottomless pin
watin 4 my 5 mics so i sit on a grin
smarter than him
coz rap got me rockin a timb
fuzzy white wit a leather black rim
it aint gon end! huh