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Old 02-03-06, 04:57 PM   #1
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FEATURED TRACK Feb 9-16:What You're Hearing (Snypa & Trakk Star)

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Old 02-03-06, 11:27 PM   #2
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bbbuuuummmmmmmmmpppp

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Old 02-04-06, 06:17 AM   #3
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Dont copy my song names!

the beat aint called "What u hearing"

i will leave feed later n geto ur track done today if i can

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trakk

flows dope,really improvin

deliverys koo

presence is nice

feelin ur energy

hmmm

lyrics atre koo

good verse

snypa

flows good

feelin ur delivery

emotions kooo

good shit!
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Old 02-04-06, 11:52 AM   #4
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well then wuts the beat called then??? cuz thats the name Trakk gave me
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Old 02-04-06, 01:14 PM   #5
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cause i sent it to him when i saved it as "waht u hearing"instrumental
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Old 02-04-06, 01:15 PM   #6
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then dont save it like dat foo
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Old 02-04-06, 01:21 PM   #7
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aiight whatever man...same shit, different tracks....but the other track that u supposed to do UNF, would be greatly appreciated..lmfao
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Old 02-04-06, 04:22 PM   #8
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Old 02-04-06, 06:04 PM   #9
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trak starr:
I like your voice a lot. but you lack delivery, you need to delivery more hard man, flex your voice a bit if you want or just scream it a little more to fit the beat. your lyrics were good and so was your flow. overall it was decent.

snypa:
you shoulda upped your vocals a bit more to stay on a level with traks because yours are even low for the beat as well. but anyway I thought you had a decent delivery and a good flow. lyrics were staight and pretty much you did a nice job.

overall decent track.

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Old 02-04-06, 06:49 PM   #10
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*listening*

feelin the beat...

first verse: a lil bit hard to understand at parts... sounded like you might have kind of held back a little bit

second verse: you sound distant for some reason, but this verse is prolly a lil bit stronger... flowed well on the beat for the most part, especially at the beginning... nice punches... nice metas...

overall 7.5/10 nice track...
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Old 02-05-06, 01:05 AM   #11
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Old 02-05-06, 01:20 PM   #12
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Trakk Star - You had a good flow, you used good emotion, your had good quality, some rhymes where sick, overall good verse.
8/10

Snypa - You had a good verse as well, liked that coke lines rhyme, it was dope!.. lol, you had good flow, and it was good.
8.5/10

OVERALL - This was a pretty good track I liked the flow, it had a good quality, keep it up guys.
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Old 02-05-06, 01:21 PM   #13
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werd thanx fer tha feed preciate it................
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Old 02-05-06, 07:29 PM   #14
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Old 02-06-06, 09:17 AM   #15
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First kid

had a str8 verse..good smooth flow..nice cool deliverly..lyrics and shit seemed nice to me from what i heard..a cool verse

2nd dude..same as above really..again nice flow...shit worked well with the beat..nice punches and stuff

good track lads

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