Aight drop then i drop beeeeeeeatch!!

let me break down this american dream, showin yo inside splean by sections
i didnt make it this far by you but by bein me, its the Free-est "Emcurection"
i had this battle won from the start, bitch raps already got its "X"
if i was to bite my jaw or bark you off, id jus use yo scars to see yo Respect
you couldnt topple me in this business, if i venomized freestylin to yo blood
my inside splean don' rep Blue or Blood, push to shove you aint no thug

Startin fresh 19 im feelin unbeaten, ever beat that im spittin you get what im feelin
I don like yo shit n i don even like yo style, start spittin again after another 8-mile
thats not what makes ne start to freestyle, im jus glad my spits made both yo "Lips.." smile
its n unbeaten streak n now on this forum im back intact, leadin this panther pack Attack
spittin n bringin yo inside outs, causin each section of yo bucked knees to listen n crouch
don even say that in this game i aint reachin out, yo jus green with envy ima call you raps grouch

Get off my dick nigga you cant even come close, wit every rap poke you wish yo mom overdosed
cus when you where born n shit at the rype age of four, you started reppin poor spittin n every coast
wit me reppint his west i got a reason to boast, my lines stretched right across my citys West-Coast
you wanna see punches im send this pussy his dues, ask for the future you bring the past same ol news
if i was flippin you in this dealin game its true, you a joker a jack n im jus claiming deuce
bitches come in dozens grams come in dimes, don you see y yo rhymes couldnt handle a sentence of mine?

here come some punches for wins lemme Talli, you wont ever maul me why yo legs so open?
its the rumble of the jungli im hittin like ali, you cant ever stop me George Forman
you been knocked out tryin to write rhymes all day, started writin after his first set of snay
howd that go for you am i drivin you insane?, funny thing nigga im only usin 1/2 of my membrane
heres a passafier hang it off yo bra, try to suck my nipple off i aint yo mama but yo dada
open up wide n you better realize, yo battlin this forums n raps ultimate prize
i "Crip.." wit blue in disguise, but you only gonna see blood wit the sky
im the mixed up emotion spittin inside, you jus whinin right there wantin my vibe
im done with this spit for now, im sick of me openin n milkin this cow
don start spittin after hearin it, just listen nigga n learn to "Bow-Down"...

bitch ass..

Said no rules, so i took the 10 mins to put out a longer verse, lets see if you can keep up x, holla back...

Its taken you over 25 minutes to respond, holla n hurry this shit up id like to keep battlin other people, shit..

this is gonna be to easy
All that shit you talked and you still wont beat me
cause really all it is is babble babble
Now i slam gabble
My jugdement: Never show your face to another battle
Your a sample of a bitch nigga
psychoanalysis got you rappin whats in your inner
make your heart pitter- patter- pitter call it quiters
Make ya shiver from this alaskian spit
cut deep into nervous system quick
Heres a tip Lil trip
next time you try to take a whole page-
make sure one bars scars let alone rip
NOT ONE WORD MADE A DIFFERENCE HERE HOMEY'
WHY ON EARTH DID YOU PUT YOUR VERSE TO START CLONIN'
TOOK ONE LOOK I STARTED ZONING
FOR SURE NO ONES GONNA READ YOUR SHIT
SO THERES NO VOTING FOR YOUR RAP
I ENTRAP LIKE THE VENUS FLY TRAP
SWALLOW U WHOLE WITH JUST ONE SNAP
FROM THE MOUTH OF THE SNAKE
SPITTING OUT PIECES OF YOUR RIP CAGE
ENGAGED IN THE WRONG BATTLE DIDNT TAKE MUCH FOR YOUR BONES TO RATTLE
PUSSY!!!!!!!

I had another verse that would have ripped you to but my computer shut down and I had to start all over. Sorry for the delay but damn homey you could have shortened your shit i know i said no rules but people get intimidated with a lot of words then they dont want to vote. you feel me get some votes see if people want to

I wasnt spittin to have votes from a "Certain.." group anyways, i jus unloaded suck it up n like it or love it, will see the votes peace..

This battle was fuckin one sided. Lil-Trip killed this kid. Ever aspect even vocabulary. No need in a break down.

Vote Lil Trip

P.S= Lil-Trip you still have to post for our battle. I think it's on tha second page. Hurry up son. I spit yestaday. Hurry up and hit that shit.

you wanna see punches im send this pussy his dues, ask for the future you bring the past same ol news
if i was flippin you in this dealin game its true, you a joker a jack n im jus claiming deuce

This was my fav line from you... To break it down I think you should have spent that time to write a shorter harder hitting verse because people are gonna get real sick real fast of having to read through 30 lines just to put up a vote.... I think you show creativity and good potential through spitting so much and having a few verses with decent content but its just too much, try and keep it shorter next time- well all apreciate it.

Make ya shiver from this alaskian spit
cut deep into nervous system quick
Heres a tip Lil trip
next time you try to take a whole page-
make sure one bars scars let alone rip

This was my favorite part of yours.... I think your punches are getting better but still gonna take some work to make em snap- You had some punches that were decent in this but they were just a little basic- You are elevating though so keep on it.... I'm going to have to give this battle to Lil Trip... but not by too much even though I think you have serious potential.

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vote lil prip he killed this bitch
vote lil trip

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The Legacy

Its Only Getting Better

my bad lil trip sorry about that bro writing to fast

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Its Only Getting Better

I think.......Lil Trip got this.There weren't n-e great punches r n-e-thing but he had a better vocabulary.My advise to U though DON'T WRITE SO MUCH no one wants to sit down n read all that shit kid.If I wasn't IMing some1 while readin I'm not sure I would've got through all that, but n-e-way nice battle kind of close but Trip just had the vocab

vote Lil Trip

lil trip have betta verse and betta personals in my view so mey vote goes to lil trip
lil trip

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Its Only Getting Better

Lil Trip
Flow 7/10
Rhymes 6/10
Structure 6/10
Punches 6/10
25/40

Demobx
Flow 5/10
Rhymes 5/10
Structure 6/10
Punches 5/10
21/40

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..The Council..
7 Day Theory

uppin fo votes ppl, wanna get some of the battles closed so any help is appreciated..

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The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams.

Tupac Shakur

No longer living in fear, my pistol close in hand, Convinced this is my year...

Death is only as big as you make it, treat it as if its from Harlem n learn to Shake it...

- Lil Trip

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