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08-12-04, 01:54 AM | #1 | ||||
That's Right...I'm White
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I'll Never Quit
IP: 954C 8C82
"this is an old rhyme of mine, on the original rapbattles, i just added a new verse" (kind of an eminem feel)
People think i'mma dick, cuz of the way i spit (what?) always bringin emotions, and my people into my shit it's not my fault, you bitches probly deserve it (yup) my anger? there's just no way i can conserve it always being dissed, pissed, never missed (true) you wonder why i bring you bitches into this ayo look My rhymes will make you cry, make ya wanna die slit your wirst, and wanna commit suicide with a gak by my side, y'all think i'm livin a lie i ain't tryin to be black, i'm just a plain white guy gettin shit of my chest, doin what's best don't give a damn, if you are impressed take a look at my rhymes, swallow and digest i ain't quite evil, but i'm half possessed I'm a Demonic Discisple, not quite the devil i'll elevate some more, then soon be at that level when i spit i spit...don't give a shit gettin shit off da chest, i'll never quit i'll always commit, and do it legit gettin shit off da chest, i'll never quit Better watch your back when i'm near cuz i'll stab ya, then dissapear make you shed a tear, when i steal your career when verb comes around, your better stand clear cuz i'm ballistic realistic, just plain linguistic go ahead and temp me, i'm sadistic droppin rhymes, here there everywhere next one could be bout you, so ya better prepare writing rhymes just outta no where come a knocking, and ya better beware when i spit i spit...don't give a shit gettin shit off da chest, i'll never quit i'll always commit, and do it legit gettin shit off da chest, i'll never quit i started off slow, i earned the respect writing rhymes non stop, whatcha expect? that i'd..sit back watch my life fall down the drain if i didn't have a pad or a pen, i'd go insane this is my life, i got no where else to turn got my friends and family a little concerned "what will you do if you dream don't come true?" i may turn my back, but i'll never bid you adieu i'll never quit i'll always be writing till the day i die, i'll always be fighting when i spit i spit...don't give a shit gettin shit off da chest, i'll never quit i'll always commit, and do it legit gettin shit off da chest, i'll never quit http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1488308 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1488322 |
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08-12-04, 12:59 PM | #2 | ||||
That's Right...I'm White
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IP: 731E 07B0
uppin
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08-13-04, 12:01 AM | #3 | ||||
That's Right...I'm White
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IP: 954C 8C82
quit sleepin
drop some feed |
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08-14-04, 05:09 PM | #4 | ||||
That's Right...I'm White
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IP: 954C 8C82
anyone......
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08-14-04, 08:50 PM | #5 | ||||
That's Right...I'm White
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IP: 731E 07B0
great peice verbatim, i really liked, it, more people should reply to this
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08-17-04, 05:56 PM | #6 | ||||
That's Right...I'm White
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IP: 954C 8C82
bump....
can i please ge some feed back on this |
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08-19-04, 03:07 PM | #7 | |||
DA FLAMETHROWER
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IP: ABE5 5A5C
diss was kinda tight if u
want i gotta collab u could do wit me called can i get votes da link at da bottom check it out http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=143466
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08-19-04, 03:11 PM | #8 | ||||||
New to RB
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IP: 5043 32F4
ya tight shit man 6/10 good
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08-19-04, 03:13 PM | #9 | ||||||
New to RB
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IP: 5043 32F4
how you get them little guys where you get them in yer pic on yer avatar?
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08-23-04, 01:12 AM | #10 | ||||
That's Right...I'm White
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IP: 954C 8C82
fuck people on this site reply like shit
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