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Old 08-10-06, 10:29 AM   #16
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Flow Intell ruined untold in like, the first two bars. first off, he had punches that made sense, not a lot of monotonous accenting of his multies, rhymes that weren't unmatched, and a clean, consistent flow.

i see about one of those things in Untold's verse, his punches hit a little bit. the problem was all the multies clogging the space where you could have made a shot at him. this verse was ehh, i expect better from both of you.

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Old 08-10-06, 01:31 PM   #17
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ya moms loose as a goose, 'n stretched alot
even t.i.'s rubber band reminds me of the bitches twat
Damn that was wack
flow a hoe 'n lie, a homo on open flys
if asked, intelligent hes always up for blowin guys
Weak
i flow hi-fi sound shit, but intell should put the mic down quick
cause you'll always be lo-F.I., like ur initials on sound click
Aii
down town bitch, ya stop'd! then rip'd and pop'd
flow was "ny.. born 'n raised".. over his crib and dropped
best line [b]
kid just stop! we know ya forever been a fag
so i'll spicin ur love life up.. shovin a pepper in ur ass!
[b]Weakin

i'll beat this geek blue 'n leak peeps the truth
sayin ur lowest ranked this week.. sums up next week to
Meh..
please, dude.. stop text, we hate ur writin arm
flow's so cheesy, i'll have integrated into parmesian
Weak
when i cuss i mean it! u dumb cunt, teen bitch!
if ur flow intelligent.. then my flow's a FUCKIN GENIOUS!!!
poorly worded and no real punch.



Untold is dope, for real though im here to set the score
You aint ever had a dime bitch, let alone Met - A - 4
Good
So its absurd what this nerd claims, searching for first place
Its 'business before pleasure' so 'work' on ya word'play'
good wording
And i would tell you to mind ya own, but i shatter business
So if ya flows money in the bank why dont it gather interest
Decent
Ya tremblin now, and during winter time youll be shaking too
Cuz come summer time, youre worn-out like bathing suits
Wack
You aint toppin me, im ending your career with a death wish
Skill is in my zone .... And you aint hear like deaf kids
Best Punch


Overall FI came with better and stronger punchez than Untold his personals were ontack and directly to his oppenent rather than general Punchez ......................

so my v/ FI
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Old 08-10-06, 04:35 PM   #18
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ya moms loose as a goose, 'n stretched alot
even t.i.'s rubber band reminds me of the bitches twat
down town bitch, ya stop'd! then rip'd and pop'd
flow was "ny.. born 'n raised".. over his crib and dropped
i'll beat this geek blue 'n leak peeps the truth
sayin ur lowest ranked this week.. sums up next week to

Vs.

Untold is dope, for real though im here to set the score
You aint ever had a dime bitch, let alone Met - A - 4
Ya tremblin now, and during winter time youll be shaking too
Cuz come summer time, youre worn-out like bathing suits

v/ untold.

wtf @ F.I. only dropping 10 lines, thats dumb.. if you dropped more you coulda took this.
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Old 08-10-06, 08:11 PM   #19
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^ i hope this vote didn't cause you to "RTF" on my battle.. lmao
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Old 08-11-06, 12:11 PM   #20
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no i dont vote bias, i know i shoulda dropped more lines but idc
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Old 08-11-06, 03:41 PM   #21
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Old 08-12-06, 09:47 PM   #22
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i'll beat this geek blue 'n leak peeps the truth
sayin ur lowest ranked this week.. sums up next week to

vs

nothing

v/ untold easy.. flow intell had soo many played lines wow..
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Old 08-13-06, 08:49 AM   #23
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Untold doesn't vote. He loses.

Flow Intell wins (1-0)
Untold loses (3-2)
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