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Old 04-22-07, 08:46 AM   #1
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dude this is hard to do man..

TER- Loved your verse man was so emotional and was just really deep with nice flow of things. you came with a shitload of emotion man with your poetry man i liked how you took the topic and just took it to you rleverage and just conquer your piece man!

Faime- you also came well man i liked your whole approach you came with topical yet you did a shitload to show your emotion man i loved it.. sometimes peices for OM's are held back from the whole rhyme thing but you my friend just brought this out nicely!


now im gonna do something in good grace.

both of you get a win.
why?!
because you guys have been both dropping conssitantly especially you TERUMOTO!.
both these pieces here did well so i am giving both a win but dont take it for granted i am only doin gthis once ina while so conscider you guys the first to recieve!
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