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Lonliness ft Edicius
My Rage-Bio Chemist
Liba Dee

Ayo... Just Some shyt... I'm makin it up as i go

I flip words schemes like twisted abdominal muscles being torn thru ligament damage//
take ripped spleens add bread an eat a snadwich made from collilaterailly brain's hammered//
my anterior cause those to think,foe's to loose sight when they blink//
fuck whose's right what i speak with have blood pouring out ya pores down the sink//
i'am crazy...life is my pill like "pink"......//
on this rap shit i commense to pull an "o.d"...maybe one day MD will be respected with the real o.g's//
living life righteous with 100 isreal's with foot long goatee's//
i flow consistant..end to end i leave minds boggeled an stabled with knowledgable facts//
more than street basic's like chrome 20's an mach//
pimp's an the bitch's their known to smack//
hoes that fucked up the game an done blown to crack//
homo's get it correct,my vocab an frame flame explosive with deadly wordplay//
that switch with the antic's foul enough to turn a grown man gay//
reconstuction the "i don't give a fuck" in you an crew alike//
alive,i adapt to the bullshit,an attack at nite//
works of art,are my hearts from heart//
poision darts....//
my body stay's cold with ahte an dreams of date-rapes//
throwing lightning bolts at 2000 great apes//
my crusades to create a flow more loved than kool-aid//
i stay ghetto..hell it's all i know..never stay mello//
on street corners with coke defendents...jumpy....in cars with a heavy foot on pedals//
quick key..see me...interruption of timeless time//
cats confront me with rhymeless rhymes//
flowless flows,wordless words....but i continue with flawless flaws//
that end up wiring lieing an fractured jaws//
MD spit's illness like i just kissed magic johnson an 10 other A.I.D.S patient's waiting for death//
i leave cats waiting to inhale after they mistakenly exhaled what was they insecuratable breath//

leavin Cats like Australins saying

Caesar On3

first thing,,,wher'd ya learn to spell....lol....some nice vocab...what wasnt made up...couldnt really make out a clear topic....try and stay clear on what ya saying......but for it been key'd in while written...cant really say much...pZ

Damn and i thought this piece would get a LIL feed back... uppin

Didn't think i would be gettin slept on like this.... and there was no real specific topic... i was just chasin lines...

UPPIN... I GIVE FEED... BUT DON'T RECIEVE???? dats fawl

I liked your vocab but your structure sucks. You need to make it easier for us to read somehow. But it was an okay drop.

...your wordplay was very nice...but like ^said because of the structure it was kind of hard to follw...it doesn't mean this wasn't a nice piece...

come yall don't sleep uppin

fuck it... cats don't wanna show love... ha... tricks

welp dawg
STructure and technique was fresh as hell
and your vocab is good but it could need a fresh up like mine lol

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