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08-13-03, 03:20 AM | #1 | |||||||
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my conversation wit da devil
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"My Conversation With The Devil"
Wake up motherfucker! Cause I got some heat for yo ass at this moment! Pay attention cause it's about to be some smoke in the city and I don't want you to say I wasn't around when I dropped godly verbs that showed you no pity. I'm A vengeful nigga at this moment and devil.... You better get yo shit right cause it's me and you tonite, one on one till the mouth of my soul spit lyrics that make your evil ass turn cowards tail and run. See you lied to me, all that big talk about fancy cars and crystal at the bar had me fooled for a sinners moment in time. I listened to you when you said it was better to get some good head than be righteous by some law from a cat who you claimed was buried in a cave and dead. I know now he is risen. I turned my eyes and thoughts to you and oh yea you had me fooled for a minute! But that minute almost had me kickin it with yo ass for eternity, but....., I saw the heavenly light that was behind you as you described the pleasure I would indulge in before I died. My lord and saviour corrected my behaviour and now it is you who are playing the fool! See the lies you wrote and the fake stories that you quote gave your simple ass away in the end. Now I hold the power with a key that is shaped like everlasting life and you... you just stand there with Judas and the Romans plotting on the next weak spirited cat looking like the knucklehead you are. So listen to this Nigga, I was blind but know I see, I had vegeance but it is peace I now bring, I'm writin with good intentions to create godly inventions that cast you back into that lake of fire. I am uplifted in my spirit I deliver godly lyrics and rebuke you to that place was made for you and your scandalous crew fuck that punk ass shit you cause niggas to do! You can't see me! The final piece of this letter is to just let you know that I was just a little bit better in mind, spirit and body than you. Cause my faith is my shield and I will never let one soul yield to a punk motherfucker like you! |
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08-13-03, 04:22 AM | #2 | ||||||
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I read both your poems and this is my favorite of the two the vocab was raw and the inter rhyming made it all the more interesting. a conversation with the devil with you as the agressor is dope!!!
"Wake up motherfucker! Cause I got some heat for yo ass at this moment! Pay attention cause it's about to be some smoke in the city and I don't want you to say I wasn't around when I dropped godly verbs that showed you no pity. "-what a way to open up a poem! it caught me and i had to read the rest. I give you mad props for this. Thank you for the experience.1 |
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