[/B]Heated up niggas[/B]

I spit at niggas and they get heated up in 60 seconds liek easy "mac"
cuzz me "cheese" is comin in lumps and niggas be hatin just like that
fuckin with you niggas is only play for me
cuzz niggas sayin they gone murk me all corny
see me i dont talk all that shit unless a nigga push me
so if you niggas talkin shit then you made out of pussy
im speakin tha truth nigga dont get bent outta shape
even before i let my rhymes loose you niggas was already layin in a lake
watch what you niggas say when im around
cuzz tha NINE MILLI will put ya ass underground
see i dont play that shit i thote i told you pricks
talk shit at me you gone meet my clips
if you know me ya know ill have ya blood pourin like rain
stump all threw ya HOOD and snatch ya gurl mayn
dont front like you dont know what im talkin about you niggas thin ya hard
but in tha mist of tha night you would be layin dead in my back yard
soft like apple so i turn you into sauce
see my neck see my wrist now tell me how much that cost
and i aint here to play them fake games
cuzz il hit you up faster then them bullet trains
if ya not realistic my rhymes will leave you twisted
and if you niggas was gangsta im sorry i missed it
i here you fuckas talkin but i dont give a fuck
all im sayin is when them bullets start poppin niggas better duck

when i come threw RV niggas get heated up
when i come threw tha hood niggas get heated up

yea niggas this is what it is
get ya head right niggas ha ha im gone nigga

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uppin for some feed back

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Gangsta rap isnt that impressive on the net... But stay up, your vocab was decent... just work on content..

6/10

one

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aiight good lookin cuzzin uppin for more feedback

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yeah im agreein with the 1st reply....there was a few lil metaphors that were made out of a somewhat decent vocab....im suprised that onemanband didnt say anything about multis....so ill say try throwin a few in....even if what your sayin is kinda played....the shit will sound better....err read better.............1

aiight uppin for more feedback

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