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Old 05-24-04, 05:07 PM   #1
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Rewind~

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"As the tears fell from my eyes"
Your family loved you dearly, but that came as no suspire
"All I could hear was cries in the background"
Like a television with sound, but with no picture
By now the thick mud was completely covering you
I really needed to close my eyes
"As the final bit was laid"
I then finally realized your fait
I loved you more then anything, so now I'm full of hate

I really needed a cold shower that morning
"As the Ice cold droplets splashed upon my head"
I really need to come to terms that my loving aunty was dead
"The rain was coming down that morning, like the havens started to cry"
As I looked up out of the car window but all I could think was why

"I never went to see her in hospital"
I really don't know why
I wanted to, but it was like I was fighting myself inside
My mother went to see her everyday, but I could not manage an hour
I think theirs some thing wrong with me,
"I never even cried"

"Chris I have got soming to tell you"
Ok mum I will be there in a minute
"No now, that child never listens"
Ok ok I'm coming
"You aunty has got cancer", as the tears started to flow
"Kind of like a can of coke, Shake it, Open it, and just let it go

"Two Years Before, everything was great"
I just got back from her son's wedding, all them drinks had taken over my head
She was the life of the party, my mum had always said
Life can be strange at times
Always some thing new around the corner
Take every day as it comes, don't try and hold things back
Our lifetime doesn't last forever, so soon god might take us back

"Chrissy my darling I have got something to tell you"
Ok mum, bloody hell what now
"I Have Got Cancer"


Dont know if anyone would get this, I done it a few years ago now
it was complete freestyle I haven't change one word.
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Old 05-26-04, 05:12 PM   #2
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Whoa homie, I'm feelin this shit! Especially this part...

I really needed a cold shower that morning
"As the Ice cold droplets splashed upon my head"
I really need to come to terms that my loving aunty was dead
"The rain was coming down that morning, like the havens started to cry"
As I looked up out of the car window but all I could think was why

Man, I lost an auntie a few years ago and she was like da centerpiece to my family & shit... Damn, good job homie...

QUIT SLEEPIN YA'LL!
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Old 05-27-04, 01:51 AM   #3
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Thanx for the feedback T.. Uping some more plz.
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