LOL aight, I'mma go bout 10

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=241131
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=241123
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3157692

LOL I'm going to rape you...

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Yo it's LUDA I ain't gotta say the rest of my name, unlike you hoe
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Snoop & I have parties at tha Holiday Inn fo real, go make songs worshipin Lauren Hill
.......... HO I know you want iiiiin, 'dis hotel everyone just to get invited to chill
Top dogg of the south I rock my chain, don't listen otherwise cuz LUDA has the fame
My tracks got plaques yea I run the game, you big cuz ya made tracks with Game
LUDA wonders if ya got any friends but ehhhhhh answer is a Mos Def; NO!
& I ain't close to bein 'cha pal.......
Cause he musta felt bad for ya to let you on HIS show!
Nigga's not talkin 'bout all times he was raped, jacked & smashed wantin a cuddle
More like a Ghetto life bein signed for a CD to name it 'The Beautifull Struggle'
Yeah Mary J. Blige on my dick now, everyone heard my CD. She left you back in 04
Now you can still afford her...... in the form of an ounce, damn cat you still are poor!
When ya released BS('98) & ToT('00), I thought 'Damn his name sounds like TalibAN'
& to learn you was a New Yorker..clued in how ya music probably heard by Bin Ladden

12.

You ugly yo, I am a TALL glass of water, I ain't needing no luck
I'm glad you tried to Stand Up, though you're still short as fuck
Talib crack skulls n when Mos Def on the track, don't stare cunt
N I'm the buzz 'round here, only buzz you got's a fuckin hair cut
Nigga I'm blastin you, outlastin fools like you daily, I'm better yo
Luda ain't even close to a grade A bitch, so I'll always Letter go
Enough of callin you a bitch though, cause not all of you is wack
When I say "OH", it's no mistake, just I Ciara in all of your tracks
I drop hot fiya son, you a wack bitch, and if you don't believe me
From beginning to end in the name, L'S are all you'll be recieving
Your album Red Light District...well it describes your shit, so fair
Cause you stop at nothing and you haven't gone up from there

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hi

Snoop & I have parties at tha Holiday Inn fo real, go make songs worshipin Lauren Hill
.......... HO I know you want iiiiin, 'dis hotel everyone just to get invited to chill
played wp, horrible wording yo
Top dogg of the south I rock my chain, don't listen otherwise cuz LUDA has the fame
My tracks got plaques yea I run the game, you big cuz ya made tracks with Game
no
LUDA wonders if ya got any friends but ehhhhhh answer is a Mos Def; NO!
& I ain't close to bein 'cha pal.......
Cause he musta felt bad for ya to let you on HIS show!
ok
Nigga's not talkin 'bout all times he was raped, jacked & smashed wantin a cuddle
More like a Ghetto life bein signed for a CD to name it 'The Beautifull Struggle'
nah
Yeah Mary J. Blige on my dick now, everyone heard my CD. She left you back in 04
Now you can still afford her...... in the form of an ounce, damn cat you still are poor!
meh
When ya released BS('98) & ToT('00), I thought 'Damn his name sounds like TalibAN'
& to learn you was a New Yorker..clued in how ya music probably heard by Bin Ladden
wack



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You ugly yo, I am a TALL glass of water, I ain't needing no luck
I'm glad you tried to Stand Up, though you're still short as fuck
meh
Talib crack skulls n when Mos Def on the track, don't stare cunt
N I'm the buzz 'round here, only buzz you got's a fuckin hair cut
meh
Nigga I'm blastin you, outlastin fools like you daily, I'm better yo
Luda ain't even close to a grade A bitch, so I'll always Letter go
meh wordplay, weak punch
Enough of callin you a bitch though, cause not all of you is wack
When I say "OH", it's no mistake, just I Ciara in all of your tracks
shoulda said Ciara's.....still decent
I drop hot fiya son, you a wack bitch, and if you don't believe me
From beginning to end in the name, L'S are all you'll be recieving
meh
Your album Red Light District...well it describes your shit, so fair
Cause you stop at nothing and you haven't gone up from there
ok


Weak battle, but....

Vote: Professor for being more consistant

LUDA wonders if ya got any friends but ehhhhhh answer is a Mos Def; NO!
& I ain't close to bein 'cha pal.......
Cause he musta felt bad for ya to let you on HIS show!

vs.

Talib crack skulls n when Mos Def on the track, don't stare cunt
N I'm the buzz 'round here, only buzz you got's a fuckin hair cut
Your album Red Light District...well it describes your shit, so fair
Cause you stop at nothing and you haven't gone up from there



Meh, pretty average battle here. Both were very inconsistant and lacked in some punches. Professor had the punch of the match with that red light district shit, which was the only one I really kinda liked in this battle. Tebo had that Mos Def line which was pretty good too, but he got slightly outshined by one quotable. That's why I gotta give this to Professor or Brandon Cielasek.

V/ Professor

LUDA wonders if ya got any friends but ehhhhhh answer is a Mos Def; NO!
& I ain't close to bein 'cha pal.......
Cause he musta felt bad for ya to let you on HIS show!

vs.

You ugly yo, I am a TALL glass of water, I ain't needing no luck
I'm glad you tried to Stand Up, though you're still short as fuck

This was kinda a weak battle. Tebo, ur chappelle show shit was cool, though a bit forced. Everything else u had was pretty awkwardly worded, though. Like ur shit doesn't directly hit. Also, u gotta fix ur flow up a bit, ur lines are too long, they just don't really read well. Get more to the point in less words. I also felt like a lot of ur concepts were all over the place.

Professor, not much of anything that quotable, but u did come consistent. Even the line I quoted was pretty simple and I wouldn't usually have quoted a line like that, but there wasn't much else to quote. Ciara shit i've seen a few times, pretty played concept. Really, all ur shit was too simple. Work on being more creative. The concepts aren't bad, but the way ya use them is too predictable, but u got this for being MUCH more consistent and on point.

Vote - Professor

Snoop & I have parties at tha Holiday Inn fo real, go make songs worshipin Lauren Hill
.......... HO I know you want iiiiin, 'dis hotel everyone just to get invited to chill
omg @ how weak this was...ewww
Top dogg of the south I rock my chain, don't listen otherwise cuz LUDA has the fame
My tracks got plaques yea I run the game, you big cuz ya made tracks with Game
stretched as hell and still weak
LUDA wonders if ya got any friends but ehhhhhh answer is a Mos Def; NO!
& I ain't close to bein 'cha pal.......
Cause he musta felt bad for ya to let you on HIS show!
cool
Nigga's not talkin 'bout all times he was raped, jacked & smashed wantin a cuddle
More like a Ghetto life bein signed for a CD to name it 'The Beautifull Struggle'
no
Yeah Mary J. Blige on my dick now, everyone heard my CD. She left you back in 04
Now you can still afford her...... in the form of an ounce, damn cat you still are poor!
bleh
When ya released BS('98) & ToT('00), I thought 'Damn his name sounds like TalibAN'
& to learn you was a New Yorker..clued in how ya music probably heard by Bin Ladden
omg..lmfao, no


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You ugly yo, I am a TALL glass of water, I ain't needing no luck
I'm glad you tried to Stand Up, though you're still short as fuck
ok
Talib crack skulls n when Mos Def on the track, don't stare cunt
N I'm the buzz 'round here, only buzz you got's a fuckin hair cut
bleh
Nigga I'm blastin you, outlastin fools like you daily, I'm better yo
Luda ain't even close to a grade A bitch, so I'll always Letter go
lmao, no
Enough of callin you a bitch though, cause not all of you is wack
When I say "OH", it's no mistake, just I Ciara in all of your tracks
LMAO!!! nice w/p!
I drop hot fiya son, you a wack bitch, and if you don't believe me
From beginning to end in the name, L'S are all you'll be recieving
bleh
Your album Red Light District...well it describes your shit, so fair
Cause you stop at nothing and you haven't gone up from there
bleh



Nice shit here guys, well Tebo came a bit weak imo


V- Professor

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