Battle Rules:

8 lines
u kno tha rules, no dumb shyt
due by midnight

"kno how ta set it up" lol, at him thinkin im a noob

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 12-09-04 at 11:59 AM

Must drop verse in 180 minutes after check in.

Makeveli Trained has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-08-04 10:30 AM.

Im diminishin this herb quik like blacks n all white pics
Hell prolly no-show, cuz right now he 2 full ta bite lyrics
Lincoln Park's fake counterpart, ur shyt will flop
Alwayz broke…
……neva had diamonds, he wuz chewin a ring pop
Ya spits thru, like poor glue, a win? Ya cant seal it
Ya only spittin novacain cuz nobody can feel it
He came wit 1 wak shyt, then fell off like Da Band
Drop em' quik wit 1 hard punch, like Artest did tha fans

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Lil C has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-08-04 12:20 PM.

im no herb say "ma’am" when u speak to misses son/
"Makeveli " -- c'mon be real that name is played like the game that u ripped it from//

let me end all "Makeveli’s" here, Oh yeah the word means grudge in case u aint kno/
lets be serious ,on mics u like a periods + tampons, son u just cant flow//

who the hell implanted rap'n in ya brain, ya whole aura just makes me ask-- how u can want mo money but still be so clueless like stacy dash*/
hmmmm lets see....the only way you'd be "dope" is if u was "crack" which makes "ass"//

take the 1st and last letters off ya name and that just what im gonna do**/
u need to change ya name to air force 1 cause i just laced u up and put my foot in u like my shoe//

*-stacey dash was in the movie mo money and in the show clueless
**-Makeveli- tupacs crew(lol plz!!!)

uppin 4 votes...n how many fuckin times do i have to tell u ALL fuckers dat im a female....Lil C(Catherine)damn bitches!!!

Voted For: Lil C

V/Lil C.......he had this battle bagged he had better punchs multi's an vocab wit creativity......trained u need to elavate u had no punchs really or vocab.....
punchs=c
multis=c
flow=c
vocab=c
overall=c
*RETURN THE FAVOR*

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no doubt...thanx J.R.................uppin n plz like i said I am FEMCEE

WTF AT THA FALSE PERSONALS, i dont do audio, so wut does me not bein able ta flow on a mic have ta do w/ nething, lmao
ummmm........ive had this name 4 years now even bak when 2pac wuz still around so therefore its not played.........

but newayz, uppn

lmao at lil c gettin vocab or flow w/ tha stretched ass lines

lol u just pissed cause u bitch ass cant rap lol.....uppin

uppin.......................come on ppl start votin

Voted For: Lil C

This was an overall good batle but im goin to have to give this one to ..........
I really like the flow to both verses
there was a nice touch to M.T flow but it still could have been a little better with the wordplay, Nice sructure to both verses, lil C had some GREAT line too
i really liked his flow but ur metas werent visible but punchlines were sick
nice battle


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