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Old 09-11-06, 06:22 PM   #1
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Daubs vs ~Luciano~

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Check in due: 9/14
Verse due 9/20
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Old 09-11-06, 06:40 PM   #2
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check. GL .
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Old 09-11-06, 07:36 PM   #3
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Verse due 10/14

Got Damn a whole Month for a Verse?

Smh..hope this dont die b4 then

Nike's...GL D Boi
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Old 09-11-06, 08:29 PM   #4
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lol, my bad. done this half asleep, will edit dates soon.
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Old 09-11-06, 10:05 PM   #5
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o i was bout 2 say lol
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Old 09-13-06, 10:59 AM   #6
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Rofl i think that picture is from a movie i've seen.
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Old 09-20-06, 02:06 PM   #7
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If i dont drop it by Tonight

that means i had 2 leave..so it will be in 2mmorow (Thurs)
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Old 09-20-06, 03:17 PM   #8
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Same ere man .
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Old 09-20-06, 03:32 PM   #9
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thats werd..we both need an extension

so i will probly drop 2mmorow

that means i get some time 2 actually think

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Old 09-21-06, 04:41 PM   #10
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14 so i show.



I accept it wasnt fair to kill blair, but that fuckers just evil
So how can i be killed for killing a killer who killed so many people
Im not sorry and its blatent, but that man was fuckin hated
I hold out my hands for agreement, but nobodys there to take them
I put an end to the government and know the next one is killing me
I see it as sacraficing myself, to save thousands of our military
So thinking over the things i done, i start breathing hard
I went from trapped behind a murders laws to trapped behind steel bars
My muscles and bones are in pain but my insides are really hurting
I may have saved generations of people...but was it really worth it
My mother'll have no son, nephews'll have no uncle,i represent neither
And all for one corrupt man to be replaced by another demented leader
kill myself before they kill me, grip my throat till im spittin purple
deathrow represents our nation,its just another viscious circle


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Old 09-21-06, 07:18 PM   #11
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Judge:Mr.Henderson you have been sentenced to 25 yrs to Life..................



~Sits down to write letter to my daughter~


Dear Samantha,
its September 24th 1994 @ about 9:30 Am
So after several years of abuse pushing terrifying turmoil upon others
"Yes em sir and No Sir"... are the only words i can muster up to Utter
my Mother and my brothers visuals flash frequently through my head
soon as i embraced my cott, ..i thought i was falling through my bed
my cell is as wide as a shed,.ive noticed that ive bled out of my nose
as i was posting up my family photo,.. why it happend nobody knows
but my elbows are growing chapped and my attitude is stuck in bold
the whole 3 hots & a Cot is NOT cuz my dinner is always fuckin cold
i wana go home,.. in 3 Months u wouldnt imagine what ive been thru
you cant imagine another Man anal'ly tryin to take advantage of you
my skin is turning blue cuz i refuse to eat until the day of my appeal
i see that hell is very real,so ill starve until they decide 2 cut ah Deal
& listen 2 how i feel bout the guards really needing to be the convicts
but they wont give me time of day unless i stay out of these conflicts
but thats what a con gets,nothing but time 2 reflect on lifes decisions
yet i never sleep cuz i stay up at night. crying thanks to these visions
of a mission to where im wishin that my life & all this pain will be over
u dont kno what its like for a rapeist,..haveing to look over his shoulder
but this knot in my stomach is as big as bolder but im bout 2 blow up
inside if i dont see outside..but baby im sorry for not seeing u grow up
But remember that daddy loveeeeee....s...................

September 24th,10:30 Am

Officer Daniels:Captain,what do you want us to do with his body
I mean he was stabbed through the back,do you see this sir?

Captain Reynoldsamn..he was going to be out soon to,whats this"

Officer Daniels:Looks like a letter..but its not finished..its blood all on
the end of the letter,do you want me to send it it like this sir?

Captain Reynolds:...Damn....go ahead..its his last thing he did alive anyway

September 30'th....12:00 Pm

Samantha:Mommy Mommy i got a letter from Daddy
Sarah:well baby read it and tell me what it says

2 Minutes Later...

Samantha:Mommy..theres Kool Aid on the Letter and what Does Loveeeee's Mean?
Sarah:Omgggggggggg...Nooooooo

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Old 09-21-06, 07:27 PM   #13
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Daubs wins .



Fck u mean he wins..i posted my verse

and its not Friday Yet..so we both dropped on the same day

damn..u aint even see if i was gonna show
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Old 09-21-06, 07:35 PM   #14
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Old 09-21-06, 07:36 PM   #15
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lol....thats more like it
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