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Old 01-19-10, 04:30 PM   #1
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i use to like this song! but no

the chorus sounds wack sounds like u biting at parts man be creative make ur own shit up..... be diffrent
ur chorus sounds mono....................
sounds like u spitting lil wayne verse lmao tkaing alll his words den chorus again... wtf
wack

u dont sound like em stop trying to be like him

back to churs em aain gayyyyyyyyyyyy
dosnt sound good

it ends geatness it ended
2nd verse
ok u kinda came diffrent da diddy thing didnt feel but fdiffrent so ok ...better
2nd verse better cause u doing ur thing


i wanted to talk about the same things that wayne did thats why i took the hook, i could of just used a wayne accapella for the hook, but that wouldn't of worked but u wouldn't of hated and it woulda sounded gay that way.
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do u know how mixtapes work? wayne steals hooks all the time, and i'm not on his dick i just agree wit the hook here, its touching on a topic that i could relate to, that topic being that this world is make believe and if the trueth about whats goin on in it would crush peoples heads, thats why wayne is goin to jail, because of he new shit like this talkin about real shit. and thats why biggy and 2pac got shot cuz they talked about stuff that people in power don't want people to know.
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whatever i'm talkin to a wall, ya'll wouldn't be able to make that song any better than me, theres only three people on this site anymore that record on the regular anyway so your opinion doesn't matter either
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and JTR hit me wit a diss track if i'm so wack u homo thug
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Old 01-22-10, 05:15 AM   #2
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and JTR hit me wit a diss track if i'm so wack u homo thug


Yessir that's true. I'm raw homie I aint got any reason to lie and sugar coat shit. It's a bitchmove that I haven't got back at you yet, I can admit that myself cuz I'm pissed about it too. Forgot my mic at Japan, pops brought it back but when he did my computer broke but I'll get it fixed. Im getting you inevitably though, you used my good man terumoto to get at me with your diss, i'd be a punk to let you get away with that.
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Old 01-21-10, 09:54 AM   #3
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I think that you should have took this beat a whole different direction honestly bra. Like i remixed it, and i'll post it up on here but eminem versee was on topic it was straight to the point wayne had good metaphors in it, as for you i don't mind your voice just was hoping to hear something worth listening to ya know? Know i don't wanna post mine up because i don't no how many cats will bite my lyrics and flip em. I do like how you flipped shit and ment it in different context because i could tell thats what you were tryin to do, but you should have switched ya flow up ya feel me bra.
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Old 01-21-10, 10:18 AM   #4
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^^trust me NOBODY would bite your lyrics lol
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Old 01-21-10, 12:18 PM   #5
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lol text battles are different from actually recording and using concepts. I have said it 100 times it takes me 3 minutes to type a diss im not going to pre write and post my best shit on the net ya feel me especially on a dead site it jus aint worth it dawg. RV is jus something fun and goofy to fuck around.
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Old 01-22-10, 10:34 PM   #6
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you always have excuses and you are always gay. i would make fun of u further but i honestly don't think you could take it, if someone burst your bubble you would probably cry in your closet(not a homo joke)
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Old 01-24-10, 03:23 AM   #7
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I was just in Japan, where the fuck were you at?
Now I'm in Cali, where the fuck are you at?
I been spending huge cash, I been all across the world
I been pimping lots of girls, give them lobster and some pearls
But where the fuck are you at?
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Old 01-24-10, 03:25 AM   #8
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i aint got nothing to cry over with this life i've been living and these experiences i've been blessed with
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Old 01-24-10, 09:38 PM   #9
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Honestly JTR i been cool wit u for a while, but if you have all them experiences and you jus keep gettin more and more than u don't have to say nothin your life speaks for itself thats all i'm sayin its dumb to argue bout it if you really are at that kinda level in ya life ya feel me bra?
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