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Old 09-14-04, 02:13 AM   #1
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$money$

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they say its the root of death
money make u take yo last breath

cuz all it takes is to rob the wrong one
soon enuff u gon b facin dem guns

maybe pull up jus park n blast
or kick in the dow and kill yo ass

money makes people do crazy acts
and that right there is a known fact

it might b the reason i make u get on the ground
it might b the reason yo bodys not found

or maybe the reason that i get shot
maybe the reason i end up like pac

but wit out the records and all the fame
so if i got shot no one would remember my name

but o well thas the life i live
i dont regret the shit i did

if u live by the gun u gon prolly die by it
so if u aint ready for this game dont try it






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man sinn u one crazy fuck but u come tight wit ur lines i like reading ur shit ur one of da few kats on dis shit dat keep it real

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Old 09-14-04, 01:12 PM   #2
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for all these niggas that say i cant rap, nigga i dont rap any way, i ROBBBBB
-crunchy blac(three 6 mafia)


i get high like the birds and the planes, i get high when bullets hit faces after words are exchanged
-styles p(the lox)

u betta tell yo man wit the gauges im nice, i'll shoot up yo white shirts till yall look like dice
-I 20


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man sinn u one crazy fuck but u come tight wit ur lines i like reading ur shit ur one of da few kats on dis shit dat keep it real
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Old 09-14-04, 01:15 PM   #3
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work on ur structure a bit, choose some better vocab, otherwise its pretty good.
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