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Old 02-22-05, 06:07 AM   #1
archieDX
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<<<<**Fuck it all**>>>>

IP: D190 7D63

pass the weed and let me blow this, its arch the dessert lotus
the rare brair who kicks your derrier*, before you even noticed
hold this,
mike and let me spit some more, feul for my war
im saying, its like im goku, at super saiyan 4
some more? i hear an encore, what more can i say?
war on terror era, means the end of our days
too deep? then its my bad,
combat contexts of conrad, causing chaos in bagdad
bombs blowin soldiers, heads get lifted from shoulders
could it be? is it me? is the world getting colder?
at times i stop and stare, but bush and blair are still there.
do they really care?, the countrys teared
terror scares, means the powers is theirs,
is that shit fair?
oil greases wheels y'feel? im tryan keep it real
the states was built on the back of cold steel
fair? get real. this world was far from nice
so im stuck bukking up, with my boy JD and ice

derrier= ass (in french)
i posted here today:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=171656
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Old 02-23-05, 11:07 AM   #2
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I dont like drops having no feed, because u took time n effort ta make this happen

It was alright, flowed real well, could improve on the wordplay, but other then that, it was a pretty solid peice 6/10

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