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11-18-04, 10:27 PM | #1 | ||||
I Smacc Booty Emcee's
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>Haterz< Some Serious shit..
IP: 1BD5 13B2
This some quick shit i did in a half hour exactly. i did this from 9 30 to 10. just some quick shit. all ya'll niggaz hatin on kontroverzy can suck my dick.
www.soundclick.com/kontroverzymusic.htm
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11-18-04, 11:27 PM | #2 | ||||
Hell yeah
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fucking dope!!!..mayn i love this track...never say something bad from you mayn
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11-18-04, 11:44 PM | #3 | ||||
I'm Back HOEBAG
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DAMN...i can say that.....DAYUM.....THAT WAS SOME HOT HOT HOT SHIT...keep that coming....i wanna hear more
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11-18-04, 11:57 PM | #4 | |||||||
Vendetta the K.O. King
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you need to quit rappin. Never disrespect a Shyne beat again.
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11-19-04, 12:04 AM | #5 | |||||
The Ups and Downs of Life
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lol talk about d/r.... lookin at the feedback I thought it would be good, but no, ur still shit... if you didn't have to rush all those stretched lines it would be half decent...but Im sure, "You didn't try".... keep workin on it homo...
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11-19-04, 12:12 AM | #6 | ||||
I'm Back HOEBAG
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D/R please i like his style....so shut up...
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11-19-04, 01:38 AM | #7 | ||||
O.wning Y.ou D.aily
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I thought this was a little better than I used to hear from Kontro.....flow wise. I didn't think it was that bad, but could definately still used some help. Sounded like you sdded a little accent to your voice a little in your intro. Lyrics were a little simple. Flow was cool.....didn't hear too much rushing like Seven was talking about. A few dubs were off. Echo was getting a little annoying. You also could have stopped the beat when the song was over.....maybe faded it out a little. I don't really like the slow beats and slow rapping style that much so I wasn't feeling it as much as some others might, but it wasn't that bad......keep droppin
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11-19-04, 05:45 AM | #8 | |||||
I Smacc Booty Emcee's
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IP: 1BD5 13B2
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yeah, tru... because i was going to do 2 verses then my fam came home so i just stopped. but my girl came over yesterday so i didnt really have time to Write but she left at 9:17 so when she did i began writin ......
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11-19-04, 11:38 AM | #9 | |||||
«αи αятιѕт σf ωσя∂ѕ»
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wow, and you're the "mod" of this forum? aren't mods supposed to critique the songs, and stop people from doin' what you JUS did? lol Enygma had good feed for this, but no hate, Phenom, i'm jus sayin' that as a mod you shouldn't do stuff you supposed to stop others from doin. You're the mod, so you should be the one who gives most feed, or atleast tries to help people instead of jus sayin' "You need to quit rappin." tell 'em what they did wrong and shit. yea, i'll peep this ish when I get home from school. pc
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11-19-04, 12:04 PM | #10 | |||||||
You Love My Style.
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Shit was aite...
i expected betta lyrics since u decree wun..lol u kept it simple. kinda 2much echo overall shit was str8 flow was aite i can relate to the topic
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11-19-04, 01:07 PM | #11 | |||||||
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ok....u coulda used a differen beat yo fa real...u aint have to use a classic beat...but it was ya choice...
but anyway...the lyrics coulda used some more time...punches didnt really stand out to me...like when u said ya head can fall off faster then cheap action figures...maybe its just me but i wasnt feelin that...it woulda been beta at the end if u woulda turned the echo volume down...flow was ok..in the beginnin u crowded hella shit...usome of ya lines was crowded...it was aight...but it seemed like u tried to hard to use effects to make it supa hot..dubs were kinda off at one point...and it seemed like the emotion u put into this track shoulda put out some betta lyrics...but ok job..
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11-19-04, 05:37 PM | #12 | ||||
I Smacc Booty Emcee's
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IP: 1BD5 13B2
word. thanx for the honest feedback
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