This was a cool battle...

Both of ya did have sort of the same things in structure, flow, vocab, etc.. but really, i didnt like ur rhyme scheme much spek.. its like same thing over n over agen.. well guess thats okay.. but like its jst u can easilly tell that its the same rhyme scheme over n over agen.. and also Ysdat had a better storyline, and at the end it was a good twist, well surprise.. but yeah.. i gotta give this to Ysdat man... g'd drop from both..

V/ Ysdat

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why does everyone make their font size large, it dont make the verse better, lol

but werd, nice battle rite here...

both came with good verses, easy topic to take and i think that ysdat had the better take on it, spek's was the more predictable of the two. both had nice imagery and emotion in their pieces, but again, i think that Ysdat edged those aspects of the verses to with slightly more in depth feeling to his verse than spek, spek's just seems too flat and lacks in anything other than what you wud get from a standard text-style topical verse.

V/ - Ysdat

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*throws in the towel*

*hails ysdat*