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3 | 37.50% |
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5 | 62.50% |
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10-06-04, 08:10 PM
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IP: 5867 FD83
Voted For: lyric
openers and closures do it for me: auto: ya had good punches, nice punches. but the thing is they werent perosnals for the most part, ya blind spittin...literally. nice wrodplay and vocab, but ya closure was either too complex for me or just didnt have any sort of rhyme scheme. good luck next time. lyric: ya had decent punches, not as good as auto's but your punches turned out to be perosonals as well, ya have nice flow, ya rhymes seem to be perfect length, but ya need some mulits, vocab, or wordplay to add some flavor to ya self. congrats with this one, ya verse was decently good, but ya closure was fire, thats why ya gettin the vote.. please hit up a vote in the link, an honest vote will be appreciated.
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10-06-04, 10:52 PM
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Da KiNg Of PwNaGe
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IP: 7753 EEA0
lets get this closed huh? ....yup
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10-07-04, 01:57 AM
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IP: A59C 8706
Voted For: AutoMATIK™
AutoMATIK™ wins this, much better verse overall, i felt that AutoMATIK™ punches were hard and hit better Punches to AutoMATIK™ Flow from both sides was nice but AutoMATIK™ wins! flow was consisant all throughout and your verse had nice structure! AutoMATIK™ your verse was pretty funny, and it wasnt boring! good battle from both sides, please return the favour and post and honest vote, thx |
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10-07-04, 02:34 AM
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Da KiNg Of PwNaGe
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IP: 7753 EEA0
Flow from both sides was nice but AutoMATIK™ wins!
flow was consisant all throughout and your verse had nice structure! lol at flow and structure in a text battle |
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10-07-04, 02:27 PM
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Da KiNg Of PwNaGe
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IP: 7753 EEA0
vote please .
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10-07-04, 08:32 PM
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
Voted For: AutoMATIK™
*cough* one sided battle really no ofense dawg but lyrics so verse was terrible dawg you didn't really use punches and your vocab was just bad rhymes sceme was basic also that budget line was just bad Matik- this wasn't the best I seen from you but it was still good, It had actual disses and flow was nice too my fav lie was the closer SIK vote Automatik pc
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10-07-04, 08:39 PM
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IP: 7753 EEA0
^your jus too stupid to get my punches...everyline was a punch..with worplay and wit...you obviously didn't get the budget line so let me explain it to you
He payed his ghostwriter too much..so he can't budget He can't throw his verse at me, cause he's too weak to budge-it Wordplay moron |
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10-07-04, 08:43 PM
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IP: 28AD 5545
nigga
you had too many fillers damn I can't even vote honestley? sorry I aint dickride you you rhymed "fuck it" with "budget" multis are ice but ithas to MEAN something damn nigga you up for votes but get pissed when they aint for you damn moron
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10-07-04, 08:45 PM
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IP: 23CC 11AC
hahah ... uppin this shit ...
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10-07-04, 08:52 PM
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IP: 74BD 2A9C
Voted For: AutoMATIK™
IP: Your shits all played and old school, It's sad this loser stuck wit this fate Cause sending yourself valentines, is the last time you had an up-date ^an ight bar but i saw the connection wit valentine and up-date You payed your ghostwriter too much, now you in debt but fuck it How you gonna throw a verse at me, when you can't even budget ^jus a filler Comin at me on AIM, desperately begging me to get in my crew When-you-write-like "this and" still say that your "not-a-newb" ^best line in ya rap but the filler line messed ya shit up plus u need to make ya shit more complex thats how Automatik took dis battle holla
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