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Old 01-13-12, 12:29 AM   #1
JTR
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You don't even rhyme that good. Pussy. You would never record a dope track. Your shit is all over the fucking place. You try to jack Nas's structure and style but you don't pull it off. Try to spit that shit you write. Not gonna happen. That's why you fucking asked me if I could record myself spitting some of YOUR lyrics on a beat so you could hear how it would sound. And I was like "yea... alright." then never mentioned it again cuz I was like "FUCK THAT LOL" in my head. I'll tell you how it would have sounded right now - Wack. I wouldn't be able to rap that shit you write to a beat.. I doubt you even write to beats lmao. I figured we'd rap together, you, Zone out and I, just to see if you could actually spit that, cuz I thought you were a good guy, but I never considered you a dope rapper. I consider you a decent writer, but who writes rap like it's actually poetry. Your structure is all fucking over the place. And you're just a bitch. You think you're highly intelligent but you're actually extremely ignorant. And scripts flip just like that. All you gotta do is make one small mistake, and I switch you from the chill list to the bitch list. You are officially a bitch now.
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