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04-13-06, 03:40 PM | #1 | ||||
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[FoR ThE LaDiEs] Turn You On REMIX
IP: E8B4 945F
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=226382
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=226125 SHEAR KAUGHN Feat J. Summers Hook- S.K. 1- J. SUmmers Hook- S.K. 2- S.K. Hook- S.K. 3- S.k. TURN YOU ON (REMIX) the ladies will love this joint www.soundclick.com/jsummers
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04-13-06, 07:25 PM | #2 | |||||||
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like the beat.........
good verse thier smoth flow..nice lyrics n shit real professional sounding like the hook like the bong line nice shit guys
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04-13-06, 11:25 PM | #3 | |||||||
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thanks homeboy fdafdafafdafdfafd
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04-14-06, 08:11 AM | #4 | ||||
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tenekkeee mitten connect game lets get the bitches in hurrrr
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04-15-06, 09:25 PM | #5 | |||||||
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ay you hoes...i said up!!
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04-17-06, 03:32 PM | #6 | ||||
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brrrrrrrrraaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat tttttttt
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04-18-06, 04:32 PM | #7 | |||||||
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liked the beat for the most part.. hook was catchy... really liked your flow on the 1st verse... this sounded really commercial... Nothing in your verse standed out as far as content goes... but like I said you had a smooth and bouncy flow... Content wise S.K. was slightly better than J Summer... not as flawless on the flow tip... but not bad either... Slurred his words a lil bit in teh second verse... *nods* good shit overall yall...
RTF check out Power Outage
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04-21-06, 09:25 PM | #8 | ||||
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wordup............................................ .......
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04-23-06, 01:45 PM | #9 | |||
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word this shit was cool....first verse was ciool flow is cool lyrics decent.....hook is catchy second dude is cool but i dunno this is very commercial gud shit tho hook again last verse was cool better than his second beat is aight overall nice drop word
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04-24-06, 12:12 PM | #10 | ||||
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Summers...good flow, damn near flawless. I like your delivery on this track. Lyrics were nothing great, but hell, this is something to bump to, not to poetically analyze. Quality is perfectly fine. Good verse. The hook suits the beat..catchy. Second verse...not bad, flow is shaky in spots. Lyrics are better here, but nothing great. Deliveyr could be worked on, but it's not bad. Havent heard shit from you before...definetely got potential. Keep it up. Good shit. Keep it up. Return the favor. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=226176 |
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04-24-06, 09:46 PM | #11 | ||||
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Sound Corny In The Intro.... Like Xtra Hype... Nothing Thats I Feel Is Super Dope... The "YOU ON" in the hook sound like it need a harmony or something.or like its xtra proper and articulated....but it is catcy.. I like the delievery of the 2nd Verse Better Than The First.... The First Seemed Dumb Extra.... 3rd verse aiight too ... This sound like it would prolly be in rotation on uncut ... Overall coo track
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04-24-06, 10:09 PM | #12 | |||||||
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beat aint really my style...flow is ill as fuck....it goes well and makes the beat sound a lil bit better...lyrics are tight....emotion is good....hook is so so but it's good for what it's for...overall a decent track...7.5/10
rtf http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=227119 |
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04-24-06, 11:32 PM | #13 | ||||
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umm coo and coo..j.summershearkaugh...its on and poppin
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05-03-06, 07:30 PM | #14 | ||||||
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lsitenin (rtf'in)
first verse dude is nice...pretty good flow.....and delivery is good too, yall voices sound good together....chorus is good but needs to stand out more have some more effects or sumthin, sounds a lil too much like verses....2nd dude sounds almost exactly like first.....good delivery too, but flow isnt AS good but its still good.....nice shyt bruh....3rd verse= same as second....decent shyt |
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