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Hook x2
waitin for the moment, stadin under street lights
but it just seems like
i'll keep waiting under dim lights, til it's midnight
but for the meantime
i'll do lines to bleed rhymes

Intro
Hand me a mic and watch me bring your light
briefly flash your life, in other words recite
with one mic and stay illmatic til tha day i die
cause i'm waiting for the moment and i'll tell you why....cause i'm....

Verse 1
Stand with no yielding lines, street lights or building signs
designed for three to nine with no chance for free design
of a better path, but i go back and never find a trail to follow
chokin' half the time cause these words too stail to swallow
cause once i get the alphabet, you bet i get lynguistic
combine symplistic and realistic with a mystic style to leave you twisted
anylistic and gifted to blow stars with heat waves
cause my rhymes infest your mind, pull weaves and tweak brades
highest in street grade, rhymes constructed and beats made
ready to speak blades and throw razors that leave fades
i've been made, and now i'm just holding on this moment
keep from folding up and try to embrace this piece of time as golden
cause i walk down avenues, streets, backyards and alleys too
just to find myself and discover what it is i want from you
what it is i want from life, what it is that a kid swicthin' his ribs
just to see if it's himself that ain't matchin, whant from all of this
but i'm under an angel's shadow, amred, equipped, ready to battle
pull the pads and pens, blastin' tents, while i'm strapped though
and until that day i roll into the everlasting trail of clouds
astonish crowds and embelish rhymes when i open my mouth

Outro
May never find the exit or climb out of the window
but even if i die, my rhymes glide as the wind blows
and even if i'm plased in a casket or cremated into ashes
i finally reached the end, finish line? i'm passed it

Hook
waitin for the moment, stadin under street lights
but it just seems like
i'll keep waiting under dim lights, til it's midnight
but for the meantime
i'll do lines to bleed rhymes

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oh shit man, you straight ripped this, no complains. this woz hot. multis were tight, and flowed perfectly. very, very impressive. 9.5/10

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thanks messenger, you always givin' me feed dawg. Thanks Open Mic, glad you liked it...

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Thats some creative thinkin with the 1 verse an the intro an outro....It made it hott. you got some good hook an talent b

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Yea, i didn't want it to be 2 or 3 verses, but instead the beat changes and i change my tone for intro and outro.

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uppin this.........

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this was good man, flowed really well, mutlies were good, vocab very good, nothin but props on this one man, keep it up

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thanks bro, can i get some advice or points ya'll like?

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lol, thanks a lot. comments like those keep me writing. well read on chalk

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7/10
good flow
it got confusing at the end but tight.

loved this made me laugh.

""cause my rhymes infest your mind, pull weaves and tweak brades
highest in street grade, rhymes constructed and beats made
ready to speak blades and throw razors that leave fades

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