Battle Rules:

10-20 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Feeding
No Bullshit votes
Goodluck.

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-25-04 at 05:40 PM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

DrasticMeasureZ has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-24-04 05:43 PM.

Flooze has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-24-04 05:51 PM.

ill drop either tonight or tomorrow caue i gotta go.goodluck in this battle.

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The Definition. period.

Check it,
The only thing 'Drastic' about you is your supreme wackness...
Your skill is harder to find than the monster of Lochness...
Pretty soon you'll 'measure' but only 6 feet below me...
Cause my 'punches' will leave you outta air and at the autopsy...
You have never 'bitten' but your bark is quite weak...
And by reading all your battles your personals are also quite
oblique...
I dont have to drop before or after to merk you...
Your losses are few but they equal to your IQ...
Just like as if Ur avy backfired on U I'll rip U to shreds...
And your rhymes are softer than Verlo mattress beds...
You might have over 10 wins but I've never seen U in EFL...
But that's prolly cause the only thing you can merk are newbs and rookies with your alphabet rhymes...
You cant win vs. me so stick to battlin newbs and rookie others...
And dont try saying you get pussy cause its probly your mothers!!

Aight that was an average verse.G'luck

You’ll watch as I get attention from the media
For writing more raps than words in the encyclopedia
You can’t even touch my criteria without being infected
With strains of dangerous bacteria, raw talent is respected
Punching me with lines that haven’t connected, misdirected
My lyrics are groovin, it’s a proven scientific law like gravity
Bomb your city then shoot bullets of lead to your chest cavity
These raps are of my own creation, spreading through a nation
Like hurricane vibrations, you want to battle, name the location
This challenge is won, I’ll break the 206 bones in your skeleton
If my rhymes miss, I’ll rig you up with 50 tons of blasting gelatin
I got you sized up with metric measure, you got a small anatomy
You’re fucked rookie who just graduated from the rhyme academy
U still think u have da advance den why ur telloing me
to ASS// (HA HA HA)
iam not taking it easy even if u was an baby i still rape yo ass.//
even if u do make an punchline u cant punch me u'll be missing like iam THE GHOST//
i'll have my rhymes on lock on u like an cobra on yo throat//

I’m the punch line connector and I’m out to destroy your cloning vector
Your like a blooming flower and I’m like the killer bee stealing the nectar
A dihybrid cross between man and a rapping machine and your not seen

nice battle though nice mayne shit votes get in hurrrrrrrrrrr

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SEE THAT EMPIRE WERD~!

P.S.A

COMING SOON-GODS BETRAYL
OUT NOW-THE SLEEP & THE DREAM

Voted For: Flooze

honest vote here

drastic measurs lines had
much much much to much
self glory----flow was ok but
talkin about yaself all day is borin

flooze--- ok punches
good flow
iight strcuture
you take it by using punches
vote/flooze

both were still ok tho

~1~

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Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ

i vote for drastic measurz cuz he had better flow and some nice multies and personals all in all came harder i ddnt like the other guys cuz some words werent rhymin he forced them like wackness and lochness dont rhyme properly so my vote is with drastic

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THE TRUTH IS I'M BETTER THAN YOU

Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ

better structure, ur shit made sense, better flow, more and better metas, and most of all HARD hittin punches, so the v/ goes 2 DM

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

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I SPIT FLAMES//BEAT NIGGAZ LIKE RICK JAMES//FORGET AIM//CAUSE LIKE POSI-TRACTION I GRIP THINGS
PSA TAKIN OVER!!!!!!!!!!!

Voted For: Flooze

Even though both flows were good, I gotta go wit Flooze , cuz his was more direct.

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Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ

Nice Verses Ya'll....

Drastic Came A Lil Harder, The First Couple Lines Went Hard An He Ended It Well...Nice Metas An Vocab...An A Couple Dope Punches

FLOOZE Ya Flow Was SICC.....Against Anybody Else You Prolly Wouldda Whipped Em, But Drastic Came ALL OUT

Much Respect n Propps...It Was ONE DOPE ASS BATTLE n Datz Fa Sho

Good Lookin Ya'll
!!1!!

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he got ya flooze. that quote won me over. everythin wuz equal till i read that quote. personals go to drastic and that won it. "You cant win vs. me so stick to battlin newbs and rookie others...
And dont try saying you get pussy cause its probly your mothers!!" haha o thats good. i like that. also your word play wuz a bit off flooze. "You’ll watch as I get attention from the media
For writing more raps than words in the encyclopedia" thats questionable drastic. u could be sayin u write your stuff, careful. peace

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aight uppin 4 votes in this biatch...

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The Definition. period.