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11-26-05, 07:02 PM | #1 | |
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vocals a touch loud
flow is str8 though this isn't bad and the guy at the end is CLEARLY someone else Dooms, stop snortin that shit u LUNATIC! not bad Kool 1 |
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11-26-05, 09:06 PM | #2 | ||
~Spitten Fire~
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flow could be polished up......ya gotta get betta delivery...i mean act and feel wut ya spitten nah mean?........but as da flow goes make sure there's not a lot of syllables bunched up in one line all ur barz should be bout da same length.....
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11-26-05, 10:06 PM | #3 | ||
Non-Convicted Rapist
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colby ur shit was dope except how fucked up the "but he put a roof over my head" line sounded....and lmao @ ovie...that sounded sick and not in a good way
and yes...ovie is most certainly real....his last name is kpolugbo and he has two brothers that i know of...viro and chuko...i should get a yearbook and scan a pic of viro..he's only a couple years older than me
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11-26-05, 10:24 PM | #4 | ||
Praise The King, Peasants
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i really liked this. and yes, that IS Ovie, i know him too. and this was really dope cuz i know about all that shit n it sounds dope to be put on a track. flow was good, except for those like 2 times you went all fast n it didnt sound right, but sometimes when you did it it sounded good. good emotion. and LOL at Ovies lil verse, haha, nice.
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11-26-05, 10:35 PM | #5 | ||
Tha 1st member of S.W.A
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thanx fo tha feed spuccaz, werd
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11-26-05, 11:06 PM | #6 | |
Just searching.
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I think Ovie is the one who cleans my horses' stables.
Kool Colby darts back and forth on the mic. His presence is like that of a darting snake about to bite you, but he recoils at the last minute to find a recording of Pop Lotty's mom(who sounds hot). The lyrics were pretty dope and the emotion was okay, and the beat was pretty sweet as well. Your quality was blah, just like my lifestyle. 7.5/10 Keep on shoveling. |
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11-27-05, 12:37 AM | #7 | ||
Tha 1st member of S.W.A
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thanx fo tha feed, werd
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11-27-05, 04:09 AM | #8 | ||
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wattup pops!
im lovin these lyrics, but bout time bought a new mic, but we do got bills lol, but yeah the lyrics were tight, made me wanna keep listenin, shyt was deep yo, ovie sounds like a cool ass nigga, takin u in like dat in all, keep em comin pops. werd
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11-27-05, 04:53 AM | #9 | ||
Tha 1st member of S.W.A
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LOL, yeah i do need a new mic, u know, but these dam bills, n plus i gotta spend a bajillion dollaz on u fo christmas hahaha. thanx fo tha feed son, werd
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11-27-05, 07:36 AM | #10 | ||
Nt Your Average
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Flows Dope Deliverys Good Emotions Ok COuld Be Upped Lyrics Are FIYA!!!!!!!!!! Umm Word The Phone Bit Was Bit Weird Lol Couldnt Hear That Muh What It Said Word But Yeah Overallecent Track 7/10 Keep Up! Thx For Checkin My Track
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OYD MAFIA
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11-27-05, 02:09 PM | #11 | ||
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damn, you Eazy-E ass spicca...
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11-27-05, 02:58 PM | #12 | ||
Engineer / Club Promoter
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Ok, listened to some acapella stuff sent to me via PM's. Tracks valid, though colby, Ovie really seriously does talk like a robot, lol.
BTW, who the hell here ever said it was Colby?? I sure as hell didn't and it's OBVIOUSLY no him, so where the hell did you guys that said that get that? smh...if you don't know what you're talking about, simply stfu and mind your business. Thank's for shopping.
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11-27-05, 03:20 PM | #13 | ||
RV aint Dead
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i was listening too da wrong one wit da phone call
but then i heard da trACK AND SHIT it was tight me and da end of it was funny Da fone shit had me rolling
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11-27-05, 04:52 PM | #14 | |
leave you rest'n pz's
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your lyrics are good, but your volume level fluctuated alot
i countered this by turning the volume up or down, it worked a bit: enough so that i could make out the low parts... ovie?...does he rap? i dunno it was hard to make out everything he said i caught the one punchl;ine, thought that was koo .. kinda gansta over the phone...should get both on a mic thou... . overall, if you keep your volume from fluctuating it would be way doper, but fuck quality, your lyrics were solid... . pc fam,...rtf on nk battle ..much appreciated..
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts what the fuck, was you high..? did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...! . . fake fucks..move on...! |
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11-27-05, 05:23 PM | #15 | ||
Tha 1st member of S.W.A
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lol @ pop lotty
n lol, @ dooms, prolly sound like a robot cuz its just ova tha phone, i dunno, lol thanx fo tha feed snipes, appreciate it. n werd daz, thanks fo tha feed, ima rtf werd
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