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no dr
no crew
no bullshit

1 hour too spit after check in.

checkin in.........................................

aiight let's get dis shit poppin' ya herd me

bout to spit

I shouldnt be battlin this newb cause he deserves a chance,
But it all seems fair when you consider the circumstance,
He said hed battle anyone, not knowing the potential skill,
Now this 'herb' is 'shaky' like old ladies keepin a pencil still,
Youd be best off if you took the time to Ad-just ya concepz, (look in his signature)
You bout too get knocked out like Triple X in Gauntlets,
Hahaha, this kid thinks that hes seriously in an Ill-squad, (look at profile)
Its not ya skill but your horrid sounds that could kill god,
You should probably quit rap and start something you good at,
Like asking people for change or becoming a hood rat,
This little fagget battlin me but I think that you should nap,
Cause this little punk would get ripped even if he could rap,

A yo,i come you accurately cause i flow wit' precision,wanted to battle so I hope you happy wit' ya decision,i'm not a catholic or a christian rap is my religion,kid i'm multiplyin' wins cause you not in my division,comin' out the victor cause you not up on my level,my stats is so hot i slapbox wit' the devil,all I got to do is point and my soldiers will pull it,blastin' cats so high you'll think i put a joint in the bullet,2-4 record so you must be the worst,you couldn't come at me hard even if I let you jerk first,I come from the streetz where we make the rules ain't no ref,c'mon now dis' guy couldn't spit fire even if I put a lighter to his hot ass breath,you wack probably got you shook like a rattle kid,next maybe somebody will challenge me that's worth battlin'.

Uppin #1..........................................

gud battle.concepz nice verse for a newb.both had gud punches but concepz hit harder.True-Souldja gud structure but evaluate.concepz took dis humour wise.
VOTE:concepz(close tho)

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What the hell kind of a vote is that???? Concepz took it humour wise? It says no bullshit at the top. anyways.

Uppin #2

IM sorry but concepz took this one you should of came harder

What a fuckin coincidence, concepz and T nice are both from waterbury... Ima get a Moderator to check this out.

i just posted don't get ya panties in a bunch

T nice I know you concepz, you have the same IP address, in the top right hand corner, you fucking bitch.

T wat u doin'