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Some feedback please...

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Beat is nice asss fuck where did you get it?

Nevermind I read the thing "Shadowville"

Flow is on point..you said nothing creative nothing interesting..just normal shit...lyrics are aiight..delivery is nice..emotion good

peepin... beat is hype... feelin that... shadowville come wit sum grime again..

hook @ start is coo... quality ain't the best tho..

flow is on, but too basic.. shud-a come alot more outside the box on this beat..
Lyrical content throughout is on point.. you shud really find a way to get better quality, like decent equipment, 'cause you got skill, but your qual drags it down to a low level where i am not feelin it.. lol...

you shud have switched up flow on the bridge after 3rd hook 2.. thats what a bridge is for..

but ne-way.. this was a decent track still...

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...685#post2162685
^hit that up 4 me... got the Dj up in the mix, well worth tha peep

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