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07-09-06, 01:20 PM
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~Real Rookie Of The Year~
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Tony Green "3 For The 10"
IP: 0500 88E6
New track trynna do me check it out....
"3 For The 10" http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=231302 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=230901 |
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07-09-06, 01:38 PM
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IP: 0500 88E6
uppin fo feed....
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07-09-06, 06:25 PM
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Whys That?
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IP: 5285 DC82
Playing.........
beats sounds like its clipping, maybe hard limit the beat. Just bass lines clips all muffled. Vocals are ok quality, but that beat is fucking this track up. Flows a bit spoken at times, but yeh mostly its on. Lyrics arent anything great, very simple. Hook should be alot more hyped, its too dull for a hook. second verse comes in cool, sounds better cause that bass line isnt sounding muffled and fucked up. flow is off and on in this verse aswell. Ok track. RTF hit up - ready for war- |
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07-09-06, 07:26 PM
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Light Weight
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IP: 0010 FEE4
Listenin', beat i heard alot..nice choice..intro I cant hear what you sying..
Vocals are WAY too low...sounds like yall jus whispering lightly..which makes delivery and presence way low too...I can tell flow is nice and I can tell you have a lil energy..so talk louder..get the confidence up..turn yourself up... You can't hear much all I rlly heard was that puff line...mosta the shit was not hearable.. Hook is not good, like ysdat said not atall hyped, ure verse gotta be much more hyped... Things to work on: - Delivery - Presence - Emotion - Flow (not as much) - Energy - Mixing keep up.. RTF on this: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=231386
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07-09-06, 10:01 PM
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IP: 0500 88E6
uppin to the top
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07-10-06, 06:28 PM
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IP: 367F 7B7D
uppin to the top
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07-10-06, 06:39 PM
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I'm Talented.Period.
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IP: 2B7A 2084
beat is coo, if not generic
flow is acceptable, but nothing major lyrics are ok, if unassuming hook is decent, if not drone vocals seem to be mixed decently...nothing bad here decent drop bro...just up the basic elements...maybe rap about something that means something... Ur not bad 1 |
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07-10-06, 09:40 PM
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IP: 367F 7B7D
thanxx alot upping
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07-13-06, 05:31 PM
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...Closer Look...
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IP: A161 2B2A
*listening*
beat is cool but seems like the bass,h/e its called, was too high.. ur vocals...ummm a lil too low presence was like plane... quality?..ummm nah i cudnt understand what u said all thru fo real...the only thing i cud catch was the hook,which was quite nice, 3 for the 10(which i almost thought was 'teen')...lol u flow was steady and cool tho... y not..i wud listen to this again! hit my 'dear dad' Thanx
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07-13-06, 06:33 PM
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~Real Rookie Of The Year~
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IP: 8906 81AA
iight good lookin uppin
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