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Old 07-11-06, 05:18 PM   #1
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1st audio i completed

fucked up in a couple places

but i freestyled a bunch of it so fuck it

jus tryin 2 get the mixin shit down

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Old 07-11-06, 05:25 PM   #2
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Link isn't workin for me

But, don't forget to drop feed on at least 2 tracks so this won't be closed.

You could drop feed on my track with Fendi.



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Old 07-11-06, 05:49 PM   #3
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Link work 4 me?...hmm i wonder why it dont work 4 u
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Old 07-11-06, 07:20 PM   #4
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glad you fixed them links mayne....


intro.... funny as hell LMAO @ the HOw High clip....

verse... you kinda bit off madddddddd lines.... commercial lines and shit....

but.... you can elevate.... but you gotta work on the following.... control your emotion over the track.... you hype and thats good.... but it dont sound like you hype for the right reasons.... nahmean??? its like you juss reciting lyrics... next audios will be much better..... production wise and all that.... flow and all that... needs ironing out.... you got a lil swag... coo... but memorize your lines and shit.... and come more smooth next time around.....

hook was coo..... swagger jacked... but its aight....


for the first time around the block you aint do too bad home boi.... id say... 7.2/10



keep droppin to see that elevation
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Old 07-11-06, 07:50 PM   #5
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glad you fixed them links mayne....


intro.... funny as hell LMAO @ the HOw High clip....

verse... you kinda bit off madddddddd lines.... commercial lines and shit....

but.... you can elevate.... but you gotta work on the following.... control your emotion over the track.... you hype and thats good.... but it dont sound like you hype for the right reasons.... nahmean??? its like you juss reciting lyrics... next audios will be much better..... production wise and all that.... flow and all that... needs ironing out.... you got a lil swag... coo... but memorize your lines and shit.... and come more smooth next time around.....

hook was coo..... swagger jacked... but its aight....


for the first time around the block you aint do too bad home boi.... id say... 7.2/10



keep droppin to see that elevation


i would leave feedback...but Tito Bambito done said it all for me.......just up the emotion...like he said..your hype but not for the right reasons........
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Old 07-11-06, 08:00 PM   #6
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it was aiight ... i mean u can on like wayne but a second off ... im still gonna use this beat.. lol ... but lyrics was coo ...but like SK said... the emotion was lacking... keep droppin my nigga
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Thanks Tito...ima use them tips
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Old 07-11-06, 08:57 PM   #8
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your quality is off..it sounds like u put ur vocals on the right side.......it sounds off...ur emotion needs too be upped......this aint too bad..i really like the beat and that song......your lyrics weren't too bad.......hook was straight....overall u could get dope..keep doin it
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Old 07-11-06, 09:00 PM   #9
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yo dude holla @ me with your SC link. cuz that link ain't work for me. i wanna hear this shit. holla
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Old 07-11-06, 09:16 PM   #10
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thanks past...yea i kinda rushed the shit

i put my lyrics and hook and 2nd verse on 1 bar lol

guess i shouldnt of done that

but thanks 4 the feed ya

it only gets better from here
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lmao @ stojacovic line. i like that. Fuck peja tho. but your emotion and shit there man. lol @ chris Brown. got real commercial punches, so me, I'm likin' them lol But for first full audio shit is pretty good man. you got some shit to work out, but I liked this shit. Flow fell off sometimes, but it;'s your first so it's all good. your emotion there tho. so good. nice shit man. lookin' forward to more shit by you. hook coo. quality is ehh, but other than that not bad man. pcc
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thanx 4 the feed ya...

i left some feed past
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Old 07-11-06, 11:16 PM   #14
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Old 07-11-06, 11:32 PM   #15
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this pretty cool man seriously,just dont like the beat,flow is cool, didnt reconize the bitted commercial lines like tito said. mmm just change the beat its friggin annoying lol, quality is not that bad, but still you gotta buy a new mic or do something lol

anyway peace good drop
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