well, it wasn't quite a battle verse because it didn't have much punches, but it seemed more directed towards someone that anything else...

Best thing about it: Well......... it rhymed...., lol, j/k

You'll get pulverized in a battle plain and simple,
^I think this was your best line, but you didn't follow it up, it had simplicity, but got the point across.

It was alright overall, mostly a brag-fest (Note: If you are gonna brag be more outlandish and use more metaphors and similies, that fish line DIDN'T CUT IT)