10 lines
no d/r
no crew
no hate
no feedin

u spit first

3-0 KO
Or 1st to 5

gl...due by 8:40...an hour

checkin in and spittin...
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ile do my verse in 5:40 western time/////////////////////////////

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i cant tell the difrence if u a wanna be or if
u got a mentallity// cause i got hoes while
u still struglin to get some dough// u betta
work on ya flow cause the west coast
gonna put ya in cold snow// its like ime jin
and u the wanna be black vesion of slim
what am i saying u anit nuthin like eminem//
at least he got skill and i consida him ill
hommy u just got killed// you from nyc and
ime a south sida and ime eaven more proud
of biggie// he represents north i represent
south but itha way will bouth punch yo
mouth//

barely spittin

This kids weak....strugglin just to battle hard, i dismantle stars
You'll get convicted....on a bike, you just cant handle bars
Im ill, hypnotize kids who have stopped and saw, jaws drop'd and awww's
Honesty, you? your like the lakers wit a budget cut, you just aint got tha balls
Just watch the reply, for your health, kids will drop concern, i'll pop this herb
Even if you spit with After Shave you still cant stop this burn
What a shame, this lame couldn’t bring game if he collabed with 50 cent in an arcade
Like a used copy of knockout kings your punches already been played, your outweighed
Why you lyin to people and actin like your good
Cuz your losing more focus than a ford dealership in a high crime neighborhood

blah
if that dont get me the win then what will

Damn, why'd you go so hard on that kid Mentality? Fuck you obviously took it, great punches, weak flow though, that could use some fine tuning, I think it was thrown off due to the fact that you were trying to put together multi's.

Shadow, you need a punch, this isn't open mic, you need puns, and you need to attack, you pretty much just said anything anyone else could say on the middle of the street, and you attempted to make it rhyme. Three words, Wackness Emergency Center.

Vote: Mentality.

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shadow:
i cant tell the difrence if u a wanna be or if
u got a mentallity// cause i got hoes while
u still struglin to get some dough// u betta
work on ya flow cause the west coast
gonna put ya in cold snow// its like ime jin
and u the wanna be black vesion of slim
what am i saying u anit nuthin like eminem//
at least he got skill and i consida him ill
hommy u just got killed// you from nyc and
ime a south sida and ime eaven more proud
of biggie// he represents north i represent
south but itha way will bouth punch yo
mouth//
im not gunna bother breaking this down...the structure is horrible...so were the punches....keep elevating

mentality:
This kids weak....strugglin just to battle hard, i dismantle stars
You'll get convicted....on a bike, you just cant handle bars
your structure and flow aint that good either...punch was pretty nice tho

Im ill, hypnotize kids who have stopped and saw, jaws drop'd and awww's
Honesty, you? your like the lakers wit a budget cut, you just aint got tha balls
heh...this was aight....rhyming was nice

Just watch the reply, for your health, kids will drop concern, i'll pop this herb
Even if you spit with After Shave you still cant stop this burn
this was ok...a lil weak but it was decent at the same time

What a shame, this lame couldn’t bring game if he collabed with 50 cent in an arcade
Like a used copy of knockout kings your punches already been played, your outweighed
this punch coulda been so much more if u reworded it

Why you lyin to people and actin like your good
Cuz your losing more focus than a ford dealership in a high crime neighborhood
heh....liked this...


verdict: the choice is easy....mentality got this....didnt feel either structure...thought the lines were a bit stretched but its all good....

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mentality murdered this plain n simple.. shadow u need a better flow, some more complex rhymes.. u gotta even ur bars out also, every 2 bars should rhyme its not good to switch so often it kills your momentum, some iight disses but no punches, mentality came in with the multi flow which made a smoother delivery on his punches were well above shadows verse.. this was an outclassed match.. mentality took it

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This is the easiest battle i have to judge. Shadow had no punches just smoe mediocre disses. his flow has off because his structure was horrible, he had no multies and no metas it was like reading a long poem, you need to work on your whole aspect to battling yo, cause im sorry but that was garbage.

mentality killed him with his first bar. he had multies and crazy metas that were all pretty good. the punches were played but you didn't need any original one to take this one. Your lines were stretched a bit but it was worth it to get the punches across.

VOTE_MENTALITY
OPEN BATTLES(I TOOK THE TIME)
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113861

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<marquee>FUCK YOU!!! YEAH YOU BITCH</marquee>

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slept on battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=105181
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113861

uppin 2 for that last vote
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