^^^ foreal tho his cat mite just loose cuzof this shit

follow the rules fukerrs..
i thoguht this was an aite battle
broolyn i wanna battle wit u kid any day....anytime pm me da link
second u had sum coo punches na personals first pair oflines was a filler but all in all u had a pretty legit verse..

Mk u came pretty hard against brook...u really tryna no get a loses//..... but if u have mods vote ull get a fair loss or win////sum cats do d/r cuz they jok brook that aint his fault its just da herbish thing to do....
bu MK damn u did come cllean an alll it was fukin close but BRook TOOK it..
pc props
brook me an u..homie pm me da link

Vote = Broolyn

Came harder wit punches And better wordplay The other guy was tight too but I was feelin Brooklyn's flow more

BREAKDOWN
BROOKLYN
I'm Not Dissin Your Talkative Wackness But Your Missin The Thought In Rap
Thats Fine For Litter Cus Mental’s Used To Havin Tickets For Dropping Trash
You Ain't Real, It's Like You Plagiarize The Way You Have Fake Text
So I Put This Guy In A Headpiece Like Girls Who Have Safe Sex
Get Focused, Like Bill And Ted's Journey Your Career On The Net's Bogus
All The Vets Know This, Which Is Why You Gotta Battle Me Just To Get Noticed


thos are killas ^^^

How You Expect To Battle The #1 Out Of 9? Your Whole Rep Is To Straddle Guys
Plus You Got More Stretched Wordplay Than A Fifty Point Scrabble Line

not that great of a finisher.. i expected him to do a betta finisha cuz he's "the best" at rb.. no hate tho

MENTALLY KURSED

Brooklyn your a newbie, you applied to become a vet but was declined//
you placed your scrotums on a modem so your balls would be on line// (online)

my punches hit to the back knockin your vertebrae disks outta your spine//
head shoulders knees and toes chopped up, your body parts no longer connect or align//

your life is like a swish in bball, your career is nothin but net//
you work wit SARS for minor wage and your still not a major threat//

those are killas^^^

Brooklyn edits his verses to win, battles newbies for his rec//
Changed your font size to a smaller font so your flow doesnt seem stretched//

nice but not that great of a finisher...nice tho.. no hate doggs

vocab=both
punches=mental
flow=mental
metas=brook
structure=both
humor=mental(opening line was great)
creativity=both
enjoyability=both
vote=Mentally Kursed\

close ass battle tho... i expected brook to take it cuz he's the "top dogg" but whatever.. no hate no beef

im not polling...juss waitin fer the mods to fix the poll.. its suppose to b 1-0 cuz of the requirments

peace

Good Battle here.....BreakDown

Punches - Brook
Persoanls - MK
Flow - Brook
Multi's - Brook
Wordplay -Brook

Vote = Brook

MK u usually come harder than that cuz.....But this is like the 5th battle Ive seen from u where u talkin bout cuttin or rippin someones spine out, u need to change it up a bit dawg.....

It Wasnt Bad But I've Said It Before.. Brook
Start Battlin Kats In Ure Own League Dawg..
Your Gunna Get Buried For This Newb Shit..
Again Every Category You Took This..

Even Tho My Vote Was An Opinon Still Return The Favor
I Took The Time To Hit This Up..(Hit That UP Too Mental)
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...7696#post747696

Good Battle here.....BreakDown

Punches - Brook
Persoanls - MK
Flow - Brook
Multi's - Brook
Wordplay -Brook

Vote = Brook

^^ Exactly

-3 from brookyln.
three of those who polled did not have the required time on the site, or the required post count. in fact, almost everyone who voted broke the voting rules.

i think this was actually pretty close thouh. and im not voting. dont bitch about me takin away from ya votes brook, as they dont count for not following rules you agreed to. pz

ayo im uppin for these kats.. gettin slept on.. btw i did poll vote aight... UPPIN FO THESE ILL CATS
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Strong, tight battle...

Brooklyn takes this for stronger punches and slightly better wordplay.

That line about battlin him ta get noticed was ultra sick.

Kursed came ok, pretty tight.
But...
If I see one more person rip on Brook about battlin newbs...
I think I'll scream.

Kursed came with an amazing opener, but didn't continue that way.

Fell off some.

Still, tight ass battle.
Deserves props.

Holla back...
Vote up, please...

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