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07-03-04, 02:06 PM | #1 | ||||||
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anutha freestyle----peep this!
IP: E63C BFED
i dedicate this flow, 2 a hoe thats called 'allysa'
bitch died about a month ago, n i really dont miss ha only reason im ritin this, is cuz i got riters block so im here 2 rite a flow about a near death plot whats there, her figure lookin tight, wit a nice smile but theres a monsta in tha girls head that needs to git let out she used 2 say she love me, but i don love them hoes i fucked her once or twice, n she styled my corn rows that dont mean we partnas right? dont gotta be exclusive but tha bitch had otha plans, sick of me bein so elusive she thought that we could make it work n build us a happy home but im a hustla, i only love sex, money n chrome sure id settle down if i found tha right one but allysa couldnt be right, shed answer 0 on 1+1 it wasnt fun, sometimes it was damn annoyin bitch on my fone every hour, even 4 in tha mornin i was yawnin, just hung up on another call then i got tha strangest message on my mobile fone yall "WAS SUP, THIS ALLY, MY BIG BRUTHA IS GON KILL YOU, YOU BEEN AVIODIN ME FO TOO LONG, YOU FUKED UP BOO" that message was whak straight up, but i was high as shit i called my boys at tha crib, "GET THA FUCK ROUND HERE NIG!" but before i could say another word i heard a knock on tha door so i grabbed a tech nine n lent against tha brick wall "was sup, who is it?" i aksed in a angry tone i coulda bin more polite bud it was like 4 in tha mone "yo nigga its ya daddy, now open tha fuken door" shit that voice is deep, that nigga sounds 8 foot tall i think i need a bigger gun "!ayo gimme a minute!" unwraped my bed sheets, there was a mossberg up in it came bak to tha door opened it slow wit tha chain phew its all good, its just my nigga jamain..... later on that day at tha gamblin spot sum niggas rushed me but they had 5 in a car, n we was standin there wit 20 long story short, them niggas hard bitched it out we put bullet holes in they car just so they no what we about it wus funny as shit, tha hot topic of tha week neva heard them faggets again, not even a fuken peep as fo tha ho allysa, i think the bitch found a new nigga word is she bugged him so hard he pulled tha fuken trigga killed her ass n got locked up, now hes doin life im laughin at this sucka, thinkin that hoe could be his wife loosin alyssa wasnt a big thang, a story 2 put in flows only prob was i had 2 find a new bitch that did corn rows aiight post sum feedback^^
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07-04-04, 04:11 AM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: 06B8 DBF2
any1 like it? not like it?
do i need 2 elevate a bit? any feedback, positive or .....un-positive?
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07-04-04, 02:10 PM | #3 | ||||||
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IP: 06B8 DBF2
yo, uppin fo feedback...
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07-05-04, 07:06 AM | #4 | ||||||
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IP: D1F4 CDDD
shit, wus it really that bad?
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