American Gangster (by the B.E.S.T CREW)

(Sonny Barz)
I'm Gutta. Most niggas in these GREASY-STREETS-KNOW
that Sonny an 'American Gangster' like the B.E.T.-SHOW
I moved up from the Stick-Up KID-ON-THE-CORNER
stopped GETTIN'-DA-ORDER n' started GIVIN'-DA-ORDER
I'll admit, I never was that DRUG-DEALER-WIT-CRACK
I been a boss. Man, I got DRUG-DEALERS-FOR-THAT!
i aint DEALIN'-THEM-PACKS, i'm KILLIN'-THA-TRACKS
why sling rocks when i could get a MILLION-TO-RAP?
They say i aint a Hustla cuz i dont STAMP-DA-BRICKS
but only Real Hustlas Can UNDERSTAND-THIS-SHIT
Cuz Sonny tryin to get his GWOP-UP-TO-SPEND-IT
without the Risk of Gettin' LOCKED-UP-TO-GET-IT.
But in beef, I'll still pick the GLOCK-UP-N'-SPIT-IT
aim at your chest, and hit ya TOP-UP-N'-SPLIT-IT
I'll SHINE-THE-PIECE only in the TIME-OF-BEEF
but other than that, i'm on da grind TRYNA-EAT.



(Antonio Banderas)
its all bout supply-n-demand, I'm the guy-with-the-plan
pump powder out the side-of-a-van,
So go ahead n deny-if-u-can, but dont be tryin-me-man,
Or the shotgun right-in-my-hand.....


******DISCHARGES***************
POW POW POW BOOM BOOM BOOM
POW POW POW BOOM BOOM BOOM
POW POW POW BOOM BOOM BOOM
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^^hear-that-sound-kid, on ya backbone's where fear-is-mounted
with ya body parallel to the ground-kid,
til your souls unaware of surroundings......
n the blood stream continues slowin the pulse-down
& the Shotgun echos a shots heard from across-town
now its time to the through in the flag,
cuz you a legend on the streets n your face's in mags



(Fly-E)
Im an american gangsta....,Hard as a rock/
Im the coldest and truest that ya'll seen since tupac/
I roll hard in this bitch...., Its goin down like youg Joc/
B.E.S.T we'll leave u shot and outlined in chalk/
shhhhhhhhhhhhh nigga dont even talk/
Im the coldest white dude thats why rv galks/
Sayin Fly-E is clova that bitch needs to go a Crawl/
But i stood my Ground and I flipped it on them Hatas/
I never gave up i took a left and right hook imma taka/
I claimed to be hard cus my fuckin style is greata/
U can say wat u want a true American Gangsta/
Ready to cum hot and steady and break u down and Fuckin Shank Ya/
I put 20 on ur life and i Fuckin Banked ya/
I cum here thinkin i get respect or Fuckin Tank ya/(pop u with a Tank)
So here i go on my roll like im takin down pins to bowl/
Im like a troll when u cross my bridge u get a slug in skull/
Get the metaphor bitch if not then say No/
It means if u cum on my block it will be tha last time u walk on all 5 toes/
Thats why i cum on here tell u ur a fuckin Wanksta/
From now till the end of life B.E.S.T soldiers are true American Gangstas/

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The Comeback


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Mystic (Traitor)

Link for 1 month:

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=244500

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Mystic (Traitor)

ok that dont sound like you guys at ALL... first off..... fly-e.... lame ass shit sayin u even NEAR the level as tupac!!!!! LAME ASS SHIT!!! just from the style i can say that aint none of yall.. and im not sayin that in a bad way.. but this american gangster shit is over and passed its trend..... im glad some ppl trying to bring it back... but dude for real.... being "gangster" and popping your "gats" aint tight shit...its daily living where im from... nicaragua is the 2nd poorest country in the world with more deported gangbangers then anywhere else in central america... bloods crips LK MS13 18th street 8thstreet piru... there all here that have latin or family here... most of them come here cus life is so cheap here and it cost u jack shit to make a living here... dont walk around like u a fucking boss thinking you own shit... cus when u think like that.. thats when ur ego kills yourself... think postive.. think other flow... other style.. make a trend... i made my fantasy shit.... u guys can make a trend too.. i aint beefing.. not at all.. im speaking my mind... this was SO-SO.. not really that great cus this shit is played more then xbox... gangster been dead since eazy e kicked the bucket fool... and the only mother fucker to say he the realest or even truest kat closest to tupac had to be eazy... no doubt hands down.... maybe the game... MAYBE... but come on kid.... ur flow gutter trash compared to pac... ok no hate... that it... keep comin players... and try to keep it REAL next time... make somethin for the game and let them follow the trend... ull feel better when they do...

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im so ill that cancer thinks im its father.

ok scanz, take a breathe...they weren't preaching about their lifes. they were writing to the fuckin topic. AKA TOPICAL....jesus.

well Sonny, ur shit was okay...felt ur shit was a little basic but on point..deffinitley had the strongest verse out of all 3. Don't really like the whole capital letters with the - signs
that syle is played and old. other than that...u had a good verse ...thought ur rhyme scheme was basic...u went to the topic good...

favorite lines :

"I'll admit, I never was that DRUG-DEALER-WIT-CRACK
I been a boss. Man, I got DRUG-DEALERS-FOR-THAT!
I'll SHINE-THE-PIECE only in the TIME-OF-BEEF
but other than that, i'm on da grind TRYNA-EAT. "

AB: ur verse was good...i felt u had a short verse..but it pretty much stayed on point to the topic...short but sweet man..u structure was kinda fucked..but thte flow still came ....nice job.

Fly-not really feelin this..ur flow was deffinitley off...ur not really on topic...no hate just feel u needa elevate drastically...


keep it up guys

probably 5/10 for real....

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A LIFE OF CHRYME

im just sayin its not there style... thats all...

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im so ill that cancer thinks im its father.

well that doesnt make sense.

because..they are just writing about a topic...just because they write about a topic doesnt mean that the topic they choose is their style....it means writing to topics is their style.

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A LIFE OF CHRYME

Ha. This drop was okay. I'd say Barz n' AB had the best verses to me.. Fly-E's was okay...keep it up fam.

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Good looking SickHead, Mystic, and Scanz... Thanks for the feed...

Uppin this for more feed

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Mystic (Traitor)

n' Mystic, thats how i rap in real life. I don't know no other style but that...i guess i want to stand out from the basic structure standard of RV.

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