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Old 12-06-06, 10:19 AM   #1
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Political Criminals

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Im about to take it to some anilytical lyricals
get politicle Presidents a punk with pitifull conservative pricibles
kids wit a serious lack of vitamins N minerals call me the synicle
But Bush is makin many mens lives misserble
this countries conditions are comin close to criticle
check the actuals Bush made Iraq the Mid east military captital
Saddam bit the master so hill be hangin from a tree like a apple-yo
Bin Laddin was CIA trained and thats the factual
Armed by Reagan Isergent savage Islamic radicles
Forced to face off for Irainian Aiatolla petrolium capital
Like apple pie rich white guys carve up countries Geographicle
meanwhile the crack epidimic apeared like somthin Magicle
to fund a war thats illegal to arm N train Guatamalin Nationals
Gangsters among us cous are governments run by criminals
why the government feed us entertainment deceatfull subliminals
Who figgured the correct mixture of cocain an chemicles
to increase drug profits in inner cities just fo general princible
Pissed cuz illegals is jumpin gates when Texas N Cali are actually Mexico
It's exceptional the inception of Manefest Destiny manefested coast to coast
Why fake Cracker Christains claim to explain the Holy Ghost
Warin with Venezuela cuz they ain suckin the Presidents popsicle
they buildin Hospitals when Purto Rico our Allie cant make a profit-though
It's like the thought of freedoms Impossible infected many land Tropicle
Andiginous people rounded up wiped all but Forgotten-though
Hough Heff keep pimpin but niggaz wit gatored feet get all the attention
Reperations get shut down in an instant before its even mentioned
40 acres like nigga wasn't workin Plantation acres like Benson
Bush caused world war three but they keep fuckin Clinton
no limit to the damage done buy Alums of Yale Harvard Princeton
incenced in the thought of this Administrations war machine movin it engins
kill a million your a King kill ten nigga gettin the Death Sentance

pm me 2 links and ur shit will be re-opened -mindstate

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Old 12-06-06, 10:55 AM   #2
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This sucks hairy testicles almost as much as your swamp creature mother.
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Old 12-06-06, 11:11 AM   #3
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any construtive critisim or is that al u have to say? Im through arguing with you God bless u dude I haven't got the time or energy to keep talkin shit and forth with you.
Sorry about those comments about ya granparents and brother I take it back it was a crass and ignorant statement it's your own fault your a asshole.
 
Old 12-06-06, 11:26 AM   #4
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And its your own fault that you look like the creature from the black lagoon, oh no wait.. that is your mothers fault.
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Old 12-06-06, 11:35 AM   #5
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hey Fletcher I battled u in here why not face me in Baller Status instead of throwing insults at my mother who you don't know. the beef is over with me and you. I don't know u so why keep insulting my family. I apologized to you about ya fam. Either be a man and come correct or prove your a child and keep throwing baseless insults
 
Old 12-16-06, 05:41 PM   #6
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Nick Fletcher.
And its your own fault that you look like the creature from the black lagoon, oh no wait.. that is your mothers fault.


i havnt seen imaturity like that...since...damn...never have

no hate here, but this fletch dude talk like he in third grade..."hehe...your mom...hehe" "tha llama close, and that kina shit dont fly like mama jokes" <<<----take Banks advice...you sound like a clown...

how u have too much internet pride to not be able to give honest feed, and come in with lame jokes?? Its the net dude, put your stupid lil "e-beef" aside, rate a verse criticaly, and honestly...not w/ phrases like "your moms ugly!"

jus a lil wisdom for this kid with obviously no knowledege...
 
Old 12-16-06, 06:17 PM   #7
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^ Look, you little dick. Do not presume to jump into the beef I have with K Illa. You have no idea about how it came about, so shut the fuck up.

I left decent feedback to begin with. On two of his open mics I left about five paragraphs on each telling him what he was doing wrong and what he needs to do to improve. Then he proceeded to come at me with a bunch of whining and saying I don't know shit just because I didn't say his verses were fucking excellent.

Since then, he has stalked me in threads, hounded me with pm's and just basically done every herb tactic known. So, I have returned the insults and battled him, beat him, and battled him again. He has thrown insults at my family, I have thrown insults at his.

You just need to shut the fuck up and deal with your own shit.
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Old 12-17-06, 01:14 AM   #8
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^ man chill.

and this was decent man.
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Old 12-18-06, 02:22 PM   #9
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Actually Perpetual Emnity is from ballerstatus and he knows all about K Illa, so he already knows about the beef.

Do ya homework Nick.
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Old 12-19-06, 02:35 AM   #10
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sup..........

sort of reminds me of "Immortal" the political aspect, and for the most part i
was digging your message and the way you approached the topic, your emotion
was nice throughout, frustration , fury and a bit of sarcasm lol, made for an
interesting read. you had a lot of good internals and multis, some seemed a
little forced and others were fire. Now as for the critique i would suggest
writing your piece in "word" so you can check the spelling mistakes. i mean
it only takes a second to use spellcheck and then copy and paste. It may
seem pedantic but it will show your trying to acheive perfection, your not
on the mic so utilize anything to help evolve and enhance your piece.Also
it makes for a much smoother read and people even on a subconcious level
will appreciate it more. some of your syllable counts were out as well. though
only in one or two lines nothing major. you may want to add a quote or your
signature to the bottom of your piece as well, just a couple of spaces down
this just insures that the verse doesnt look caged in by the dimensions of
the post box, purely an asthetics thing, but like i said perfection.i enjoyed this
piece overall its just the finer points that need adressing...im out fam


..........peace
 
Old 12-19-06, 10:17 AM   #11
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^ THe way you type pisses me off,
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Old 12-19-06, 05:37 PM   #12
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Quote:
Originally Posted by RyP-6
Actually Perpetual Emnity is from ballerstatus and he knows all about K Illa, so he already knows about the beef.

Do ya homework Nick.



Dude, you didn't even know about the whole aspect of my beef with K Illa so shut the fuck up. The only way any of you cheese dicks would know was if you was stalking me in threads to, and just not posting about it.
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