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Old 08-12-05, 12:39 PM   #1
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So Destructive

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-Young Kastro-
Awww nigga do you...know what you did?
One pop one kill thats freal
.....................................T-TEAM!!!

Awww nigga do know who ...this ...is?
Its Young Kastro up in this ....bitch
Got them loaded pumps, lemme know i'll dump
Gimme any reason to bang at you chumps


-Paul Cain-
Its Paul Cain,.... back on that gangsta shit
These other niggas, they just make me sick
Betta duck, when hear the safety click
All the girls, they wanna chase me quick
Its that fast thinker, wit a lazy spit
Fuck wit us, than you must be crazy bitch
Sell more than you, wit a third of the luck
Dress to impress, mofucka icebergs on the cuffs


I stay wit the beef bring burgers to ya troops
Move rocks wit style, I'm the server in the suit
Nigga fuck ya burners and ya coups
I caught a 25 to life, for murderin the booth
(haHAAA)
Aint a chance when the snub is sparkin
Fuck the truck, put ya body in the glove compartment
Not a problem unless you point
Then you gon have blood on ya diamonds like K.West's new joint


Chorus:
My 40 so destrucitve hangin on me
Its the way that it blast thats makin me scccarry
If you buck, that im gonna start blarrrring
Ima reload, if you niggas wan do it again


My 40 so destrucitve hangin on me
Its the way that it blast thats makin me scccarry
If you buck, that im gonna start blarrrring
Ima reload, if you niggas wan do it again



-Young Kastro-

Young Kas move quick, on cue like poolsticks
And got a cool grip on shit that make fools sick
I move bricks, or else im flippin it quick
These niggas copy and paste, they stick to the script
Niggas thats scared got somethin to lose
Im movin in the game i got somethin to prove
Im you after my cash, then im dumpin the Uz
And if that shit jam up, its some lumps wit a bruise
Im still not trustin the blue
cuz my heat kick back, like its a gun in my shoe
You lose ya place, if you step outta line
You lose ya face, if you step into mine
I step into crime, by the flexin the nine
Leave pansy punks perplexed, no disgression its fine
I keep stones for bones, Kas break em wit ease
Make clowns fall, time to rake in the leaves


Chorus:
My 40 so destrucitve hangin on me
Its the way that it blast thats makin me scccarry
If you buck, that im gonna start blarrrring
Ima reload, if you niggas wan do it again



My 40 so destrucitve hangin on me
Its the way that it blast thats makin me scccarry
If you buck, that im gonna start blarrrring
Ima reload, if you niggas wan do it again


-Paul Cain/Young Kastro-
Those who dont get all this heat stuff is damn haters
And If you dont get gun talk,..... than GET A TRANSLAtor
Im trynna land paper
Bitch get on ya knees, cuz Cain cant ever "stand" fakers
My niggas stay thugg-in, wit them thangs tucked in
Wit white T's and fitteds' fresher than a Glade plug-in
Look, i'll give you flesh wounds
And make sure "hugo/yougo" get beat like that nigga from Neptunes

Im hot in the north and im so freal in the south
N if you got braces, than you know how the steel feel in ya mouth
I dont play, i spray till these thugs dead
Can't stand when lil niggas tryn and jump like Spudd Webb
Kas is plannin an attack, wit the hammers n the Macs
I aint talkin Bubble jets when i put the Cannon to ya back
Endin on the note tell these pricks "get lost"
Cuz you can resemble ya grandma when ya WIG IS OFF......T-TEAM...



My 40 so destrucitve hangin on me
Its the way that it blast thats makin me scccarry

If you buck, that im gonna start blarrrring
Ima reload, if you niggas wan do it again
 
Old 08-12-05, 12:47 PM   #2
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gotta keep the link in there nasuhmeanyaheardme

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=204135
 
Old 08-12-05, 02:40 PM   #3
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THIS WAS Iight bad flow, becuz of the poor structure up on that.....up on vocab and multis other than that its ill...had a gangsterness feelin to it keep uppin keep postin......rtf yo...peace
 
Old 08-16-05, 01:58 PM   #4
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thanks for the feed. i need some more peeps. get at me
 
Old 08-16-05, 02:02 PM   #5
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Meh. It's not very original. The colors are pretty much blinding as well. I love my rap in orange and bright blue. Also, some lines seemed stretched, you need a better vocab, and when you flex like this you need originality and wordplay...and you didn't have that.

5/10 from what I read, before my eyes turned into bright suns reflecting your colors and exploded.
 
Old 08-16-05, 02:03 PM   #6
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By the way, RTF on either Sesame Street Terror ft. Os1 or Forbidden Fruit, or don't expect more feed. ;D
 
Old 08-16-05, 05:18 PM   #7
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i liked it alot good shit in here keep doin ya thing 7/10
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Old 08-18-05, 10:36 PM   #8
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Nice piece man, felt this a lot....6/10 keep it up
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Old 08-23-05, 10:22 AM   #9
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thanks uppin this one some mo'
 
Old 10-09-06, 11:09 PM   #10
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thanks uppin this one some mo'..................
 
Old 10-18-06, 03:02 AM   #11
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thanks uppin this one some mo'..................
 
Old 10-18-06, 01:05 PM   #12
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Blah it was coo... It just seemed more suitable if ya'll did this as an audio..you know..but what is the deal with the name "Paul Cain" you know someone already has that name in desert storm so if u do make it to the industry you gonna need a name change...

I skimmed through this... it wasn't what I wanted to see but it was decent

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Old 10-20-06, 08:56 AM   #13
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I liked it. nice flow and multis. X is right though. It would be better as an audio. Nice punchlines too. 6.5/10
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Old 10-20-06, 01:00 PM   #14
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ight yo, thanks for the feed, uppin this shit.............
 
Old 10-27-06, 12:50 PM   #15
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thanks for the feed, uppin this shit...............................
 
 


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