What up .. Aint posted in a minute .. I just wanted to give shout outs to AlcaTrakz for mixing this .. VERY dope job .. You know I'll get back .. Im going to post the lyrics with this so cats can read along .. Cuz some had a hard time catching the meaning .. So you can read along and see if you can catch it a tad bit better .. Check out the mastering in the third verse .. I needed it to stick out .. Because its not me speaking on the situation .. Its the guy in the story speaking on the situation .. Very touchy subject .. I think I did it right, though .. Again, thanks AlcaTrakz .. Hope you cats enjoy this .. I know I did ... Oh yeah, DROP YOUR FUCKIN LINKS ..

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DROP LINKS!! If you peep this PLEASE reply I'd love to know what you think .. Seriously ...

pz..1
-Salvation
Horror Flick Entertainment

Lyrics:

Salvation - "A Pretty Girl" (Wrong Love)

she was young, and had fallin' in love
he had gotten her away, from all of the drugs
not good, atleast to all the others who seen
they were wonderin' just where, her mother could be
and it was wrong, eventhough her heart that's inside
said it was right, see this had been a part of her life
so, while these people always gandered and stared
she knew deep down inside, he'd never damage a hair
that's on her head, eventhough he probably will burn
in hell, she's given him her fuckin' body in return
for his help, feels that love just lingers in the air
so she lays in bed with 'em, with her fingers in his hair
just, touchin' eachother, huggin' one another
kissin' and rubbin', you know they lovin' one another
and these people didn't know, how strong it really was
but they did know, however, that it's the wrong love

wrong love, people say to follow your heart
what if your heart's love, is hollow and it's dark
but, what if the people had no clue in what you felt
what if, you never knew, what you was doin' to yourself
wrong love, people say to follow your heart
what if your heart's love, is hollow and it's dark
but, what if the people had no clue in what you felt
what if, you never knew, what you was doin' to yourself

wrong love, the type the local people had despized
they pictured pain, when they seen it in their eyes
they told the pretty girl, to call the shit right off
but she didnt, so then they had just brought it to the law
but, they didn't do shit, with nothin' against him
they couldn't, girl didn't speak, so their love wasn't endin'
a touch from the heavens is how they had described what they felt
the people hated it, yet the couple tightened their belt
they knew that them together, we're meant to be
but yet in public, they agreed it wasn't meant to see
cuz they were special, not because the difference of the age
but because the couple's background wasn't typical today
what a pitiful disgrace, is what they thought of the guy
this is the wrong love, its all nonsense and lies
all they ever really wanted was him rotten in hell and
yet the couple didnt care, they thought they was jealous

wrong love, people say to follow your heart
what if your heart's love, is hollow and it's dark
but, what if the people had no clue in what you felt
what if, you never knew, what you was doin' to yourself
wrong love, people say to follow your heart
what if your heart's love, is hollow and it's dark
but, what if the people had no clue in what you felt
what if, you never knew, what you was doin' to yourself

wrong love, and really what they do is their choice
understand it's their lives, their views and their points
but the sad thing is, what he sought in a while
he wanted to bond with her, and father a child
and she felt the same way, but what had they thought
they told her it was fake, and the love was just wrong
she felt weird about it all, well some of the time
but then he'd always talk to her, to comfort her mind
"...pretty girl, eventhough they see it as wrong
it's the two us, not them, believe that it's strong
i love you to death, so let 'em stay in misbeleief
i'm sayin' everytime we kiss my heart just skips a beat
so let 'em say we wrong, this is our passion and soul
they all do it too, let's never hold compassion, alone
we have sex to show our love, so the nasty things i do to you
aren't wrong, remember girl, your daddy thinks your beautiful..."

wrong love, people say to follow your heart
what if your heart's love, is hollow and it's dark
but, what if the people had no clue in what you felt
what if, you never knew, what you was doin' to yourself
wrong love, people say to follow your heart
what if your heart's love, is hollow and it's dark
but, what if the people had no clue in what you felt
what if, you never knew, what you was doin' to yourself

...wrong love, there's such a pretty little girl
in every city of the world that falls for wrong love...

everyone must listen to this...and listen close....wait for the twist...

dope ass shit right hur'

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..ghost...

this was seriously dope content wise, as i told you on AIM and RnR .. although it kinda made me sick to my stomach, is was very ill ..

flow and delivery, like always, were fire .. beat was simple, very fitting for this topic though ..

nice shit sal .. guess i'll send this to andrea later.

^up^

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..ghost...

u sound so much like a guy i know.. www.soundclick.com/btruth but damn this was nice... nice mixing to alca... n like the lyrics... this fire right here..

return the favor:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106350

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This was fuckin sick man, I was feeling this. Quality was dope, your voice was dope, your flow was ill, I never really felt the big twist, lyrics were very nice. I thought the story ended a bit abrupt, kinda left me hangin. But this was straight fire, I'd bump this in my car no doubt.

Keep droppin, you're goin somewhere.

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<center>Deja Vu

..Remember These Dope Kids?..

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^did you get the story, tho???

the entire song is meant to make you think that this is just a normal relationship .. and the public doesnt think the two belong together ..

but .. then at the end ..

"we have sex to show our love, so the nasty things i do to you
aren't wrong, remember girl, your daddy thinks your beautiful...""

... i reveal it .. its about a father who's molesting his daughter ;-)

oh shit! that twist is dope(but sick) i didnt read the lyrics cause i wanted to catch it for my self. it caught me by suprise. this was a dope concept.

yo son dope track
beats sick, lyrics tight
keep this shit up

love dont exist feel me so it cant be wrong feel me but flow is nazty like unwashed hair and delivery is like milk in the 80s feel me i like tha story it made me feel gooey and mushy inside feel me holler

O_o
Liked ya music for a bit now coz ya voice got a uniqueness bout it
not ya typical U.S chord & ya mix up ya lyrics w/ the story nice
Twists are nice and ya delivery/flow got on top thru out
Props to Alk w/ the mix down etc..
Sal-V..you got a mix tape??/Anything sendable apart from S'clicks??
me N ma Boy Pedro Nok gatherin our beats N putting ideas down now
but we nearly done w/ the grimy shit N gettin recordin soon...
most of the recordin will be in our colleges coz we go different ones
but if ya wanna throw a verse down to it..ya more than welcome..
we'll provide beat etc..we from U.K so we jus gonna get a few U.S heads
down to throw sum shit..mix it up a lil so its U.S & U.K...
we'll jus convert yours from s'click...
anyways if ya interested hit me up on Aim= PsDetained
pz

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"Woop Woop, its the sound of da police"

thanks for replies

ill get at you B.I.

I always knew you were a sick fuck at heart.

Wow..This shit was crazy..
The content and everything was on point and the twist at the end just took my breath away...Really moving track, shit was dope...
Keep that shit up, man, you got skills, for real..