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5-BARZ
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Check in by: 08-22-04 at 09:27 PM

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DrasticMeasureZ has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-22-04 09:03 PM.

sinn has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-22-04 09:04 PM.

u wanna battle, lets do that shit
cuz im loadin up, my lyrical clip

yo names drastic measures, but u aint nothin to me
u like silkk the shocker, and im master p

cuz im bout it bout, thats what i said
i stay battlin lames, to make my bread

call me baker man, cuz i sell them cookies
in this war ima vet, u a rookie

u annoy me dog, just like a itch
but like chapple, HA-HA-HA, im rick james bitch

Ill "hit you up" puttin you in a "ICU hospital bed" while your "about to flat line"//
my "punches" will "hit" you in "your jaw so hard" your "teeth and your gums will no longer align"//

Ill "split your wig" then "divide" it among "mathematicians" who wanna become "professors"//
Ill "chop your body" into "traces of pieces", then "own you"...you "address" me as you "possessor”// (someone who owns somethin)

my "spit" leavin you "illiterate, cant sleep, but unconscious"// (paralyzed)
Ill "cause" you "apprehensive fear" in your "dreams like Freddie Kruger" but "kill you wit deadly toxins"//

u call yo self the sinn u cant be evil if u was jackal and turned to mr.hyde damn sinhttp://community.rapverse.com/showbattlethread.php?p=1519620&posted=1#post1519620
"battlin me is suicidal" I guess you have "no interest in winnin or livin"//

Ill "get in your head" like I was a "exorcist" and you was a "preacher"//
my flows "leave scars and cuts" thatll leave you with a "distinctive feature"//

THAT HTTP SHIT DAT WAS AN LINK TO OUR BATTLE SORRY

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that shit was funny also tho u gotta elevate more and add a little length to ya lines. Ur punches were funny and thats wat gets tha crowd goin

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Voted For: sinn

i'll go with sinn on this one but , to be honest the other guy jus went over, his was like a paragraph but lyrically he owned, punches were weak on both sides but sinn followed the rules peace

Wtf U Dumb Crook

5-barz U Know Whats Dat Is Right

2 Lines=1 Bar

2-lines=1 Bar

2 Lines=1 Bar

2 Lines=1 Bar

2 Lines=1 Bar

Dats 10 Lines Read How Many Lines I Have U Dickrhyda

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COMING SOON-GODS BETRAYL
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Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ

sinn no good disses or punches no good nothing flow and strture was ok no wordplay and weak vocab 1/10
drastic good vocab and wordplay good punches work on disses and personals good verse overall punches carried it structure needs work a 6/10

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My vote goes to drastic measurez....sinn...your verse was awful....you need some serious elevation...and drastic..you need to stop usin all those damn quotes....but your verse was ok i guess...nothin spectaculet...your closer however..did stand out...i liked that...i thought it was fairly clever...anywyas...yall know where i stand..much respect to both of you...and please vote here....

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=144336

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Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ

close battle in the case that neither of u had wordplay or hard punches. so imma go basically on who looks more elevated sooo.... ya, he had better vocab and better metaphors, ya'll both need to really elevate on puches wit wordplay. a simple......
i leave u like kanye and make ya spit thru the wire.
this cat couldn't spit hot shit, sqoutin over a fire.
^^^thats a weak one from an older battle, but u get the idea. and if one of u had a wordplay punch like my secound line, u woulda got my vote str8 up.

u cant jus say what your doin... like
u wanna battle, lets do that shit
cuz im loadin up, my lyrical clip
....or what your ganna do to them

Ill "split your wig" then "divide" it among "mathematicians" who wanna become "professors"//
Ill "chop your body" into "traces of pieces", then "own you"...you "address" me as you "possessor”//

anyway taturials aren't over rated by any case. they'd explain it better than me.

anyway hit my battle up wit a honest vote.
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...15&page=1&pp=15

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Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ

ima give u da vote dogg just bcuzz ima nice guy even tho ya verse lines is madd long how can u spit dat on a beat...but sinn give up rappin babi lmaooo..WUN

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