Is This The Way, Featuring Past Tense, Sarah Robles, 286!!!!!!
http://www.zshare.net/audio/558982393689c04e/


First verse: Past Tense
Hooks: Past Tense, Sarah Robles
Second Verse: Sarah Robles
Third Verse: 286


im really proud of this mix....tell me what you think i can to to improve this.....any any any feed given i can give alot back if you have a song for me to leave feed on.

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it's a link to this thread :/

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fixed. haha!!!!!!!!!

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gah I can't wait to hear this, it's downloading right now

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1st guy had a nice flow and stuff i think its a simple song and love songs aren't really hard to write but its deffinetly easily catchy for people to sing along to. The chick has a nice voice kind of shaky but other than that nice 3rd guy had a nice flow seemed like a voice for like a club banger but you deff switched it up for a love song and i liked it overall. And i would bump it. And it's mad catchy. I would appreciate feed on my shit in return please and good looks.

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Im really feeling this, 1st verse is sounding sick, not being a dick or nothing but that chick can't really sing, and I think she killed the track. I can really tell whe she comes in on the hook, doesn't go in harmony and her solo was all over the place. The male vocals in the course sounds good though, 2nd verse doesn't sound as professional as the first, sounds amature, kinda monotone add some expression and dubs. Just sounds empty and basic compared to the rest of the track.

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trax hott but the gal needs sum improivement on her highs she shouldnt be in the hook p.t was the other kat on the hook right???that was nice....whoever sang the hook on the male end merked it...second verse again shes was badd with the highs

286 you know what it is fam you goit swag......we have many more bagners to come fam good drop mixing was cool just mabe try suymthing difrent with the gal

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yeah thanks, i have anoter mix with more reverb on her....ima try and autotune her too...a real autotune not tpain style....anything else yall can do to help?

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past tense ay, havent heard anything from you in a minute. i used to bump some of ya shit. this is dope though, nice beat and your vocals mesh well. i dont like the autotune shit it kills it almost but it's almost hardly noticeable so i guess its cool. the flow and delivery fits with the beat. sarah has a good and strong voice but the quality of her vocals could use some better mixing probably. overall this is a pretty sick track right off the bat man. nice job, you better be steakin that chick cause she sounds fine.

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http://community.rapverse.com/showt...688#post3254688

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Yeah I remember you tellin me about this one so I'll leave a little feed on it from the new parts.

Chorus with girl is a no. Girls whole part is a no. Not to be mean, but she's not cut out for a solo. Tell her not to do so many runs cause her voice isn't right for it. And her verse sounds much too empty.

Last verse not really liking it to be honest. I think you coulda done much better.

you can use this version if you want, but I'm not diggin that chick's singing man. She's just off beat to much. She has a nice voice don't get me wrong there, but not for this song. I have a guy willing to do the second verse. And I don't like the effect at the beginning, and when she sang over the chorus it didn't sound right.

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yeah let me on her verse!!!!!!!lol
pleaseeeeeee

an p.t u finish that??

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^^I have finished I just have to mix it.

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