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08-19-07, 10:06 PM
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gods gift 2 da world
IP: 0265 319C
every since i was born i was gods gift to the world
i ejaculate nut out of my body like im gods gift to a squirrel so i got to make it,it aint about being famous,neither showing off to the world like im naked,i got a gift and the haters hate it, i love the hatred ,im tryin toshine but im in the dark like night ,hatin is s how i know im doing something right, instead of left ,cause ima try until god takes away my breath,thats why every verse i write my best,cause im gods gift and never less,so dont get ya face wrecked,cause niggas can see im hard like a nigga wearing a dress http://www.community.rapverse.com/s...d=1#post3181467 http://www.community.rapverse.com/s...d=1#post3181468 |
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08-20-07, 11:22 PM
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IP: 9204 9119
ehhh im not feelin this wiley....this was more like a small keystyle than the concept u were trying to bring.....u needed to get more descriptive on why your Gods Gift to the world........well better yet stay on subject.....no hate though just how i see it....keep workin on your writtens man.....
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=243760 check out my newest piece called Betrayal....^^^^^^ ~1~
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